the short sentence sizes show: the short sentence sizes show a bluntness a steady rythm like an anger but with clarity its very beautiful and clear while remaining pointed and emotion filled
Ouch!: This hits right in the feels. I had been trying EMDR to assist with my cPTSD however self care has always been problematic for me. Possibly due to being AuDHD. After a few attempts finally had some happy places to think on, only to have the harsh light of day show me the true reality.
Your delicately gleaming,: Your delicately gleaming, euphorically beautiful style can be described by your own words:
"In the dance of ink and paper . . ."
There are poems that move us and there are poems that immerse us. This lilting, hypnotic love song does both, and with lines that could stand alone as timeless gems:
"Through the veil of the/ past, the future peers, In the silence of the moment, the/ universe hears."
What epic insight followed by the most jubilant celebration of unshakable love. This is how true devotion shines when crystallized in excellence.
I apologize for the typo in: I apologize for the typo in the comment. To the best of my recollection, it should have been "very brief block of time." Sorry about that, I was very ill at the time I wrote it.