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unspokenvoice commented on: 2008 by allets 1 year 39 weeks ago
the short sentence sizes show: the short sentence sizes show a bluntness a steady rythm like an anger but with clarity its very beautiful and clear while remaining pointed and emotion filled
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unspokenvoice commented on: This Poem Came To Me On My Last Day In The Hospital by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 39 weeks ago
sweet and swift like a cool: sweet and swift like a cool breeze very nice
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cynosure commented on: To Persephoné by redbrick 1 year 39 weeks ago
Ouch!: This hits right in the feels. I had been trying EMDR to assist with my cPTSD however self care has always been problematic for me. Possibly due to being AuDHD. After a few attempts finally had some happy places to think on, only to have the harsh light of day show me the true reality. 
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patriciajj commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 1 year 39 weeks ago
That is the most generous,: That is the most generous, assuring and valuable word you could grant me. Thank you so much! 
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patriciajj commented on: In the quiet of the night by dhicks01 1 year 39 weeks ago
Your delicately gleaming,: Your delicately gleaming, euphorically beautiful style can be described by your own words:   "In the dance of ink and paper . . ."   There are poems that move us and there are poems that immerse us. This lilting, hypnotic love song does both, and with lines that could stand alone as timeless gems:   "Through the veil of the/ past, the future peers, In the silence of the moment, the/ universe hears."   What epic insight followed by the most jubilant celebration of unshakable love. This is how true devotion shines when crystallized in excellence.  
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Madmartigan commented on: Memorial Day by Teytonon 1 year 39 weeks ago
Yeah, we're thankful.: Yeah, we're thankful.
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georgeschaefer commented on: UNIQUE OR AT LEAST DISTINCTIVE by georgeschaefer 1 year 39 weeks ago
thank you kindly: thank you kindly
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S74rw4rd commented on: UNIQUE OR AT LEAST DISTINCTIVE by georgeschaefer 1 year 39 weeks ago
Although brief in structure,: Although brief in structure, this poem contains a profound depth of wisdom.
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dhicks01 commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 1 year 39 weeks ago
Excellent!: Your writing leaves me with one descriptive word, Excellent! Dennis Hicks
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beaconzbard commented on: MY PEACE AND JOY (ARE GONE) by beaconzbard 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you for your kind: Thank you for your kind words.  Hope you'll click the link in the Author's notes/comments section and listen to me sing it.
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S74rw4rd commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 1 year 39 weeks ago
Thank you for that reply.: Thank you for that reply.
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unspokenvoice commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 1 year 39 weeks ago
no worries most of my poems: no worries most of my poems are written in a sort of daze and i hit the wrong key when typing dozens of times haha
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S74rw4rd commented on: ramble by unspokenvoice 1 year 39 weeks ago
I apologize for the typo in: I apologize for the typo in the comment.  To the best of my recollection, it should have been "very brief block of time."  Sorry about that, I was very ill at the time I wrote it.
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unspokenvoice commented on: ignorance by unspokenvoice 1 year 39 weeks ago
thnk you: thnk you
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unspokenvoice commented on: KARMA by joy 1 year 39 weeks ago
simple and sweet love it: simple and sweet love it
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