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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Coffee, Black by catherine 1 year 16 weeks ago
The opening line sets up the: The opening line sets up the poem so well. What follows seems to say so much about the author of this poem - at least as much as it does in tribute to the muse.
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Pungus commented on: God fondly is doing his job by humanfruit 1 year 16 weeks ago
why thank you: why thank you
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ramonathompsont commented on: God fondly is doing his job by humanfruit 1 year 16 weeks ago
cool write. : cool write. 
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patriciajj commented on: summer fête by redbrick 1 year 16 weeks ago
Those first two stanzas,: Those first two stanzas, blossoming with lush metaphors within a superlative simile, were the perfect launching place into a highly evocative reverie.   You realize that small details have explosive power and that zooming in on the right ones ignite the imagination and take us places far beyond what unnecessary disclosure could take us. Brilliantly subtle with intense emotion crackling throughout.   Still lost in its perfection! 
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patriciajj commented on: truest frame by redbrick 1 year 16 weeks ago
Another bite-sized: Another bite-sized masterpiece. The way you can successfully merge simplicity and sumptuous wordplay is astounding because it's deceptively difficult to be simple while there are so many pitfalls in being opulent.   This is a sweetly lyrical and profound creation that captures the passage of time in all its inner spectacle, and this line, in particular, left me wonderstruck:   "only truest gold remained"   I'm definitely a fan of your deft wordweaving.    
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Teytonon commented on: Memory’s fine, do something by Teytonon 1 year 16 weeks ago
You sound like Homer Simpson..: You sound like Homer Simpson.. Mmm.. Crunchy!  Haha. 
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Memory’s fine, do something by Teytonon 1 year 16 weeks ago
Mmm: I always love a crunchy snack...like falafel.
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fo0l4u commented on: Home Again by fo0l4u 1 year 16 weeks ago
I like that. : I like that. 
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patriciajj commented on: Whooo by humanfruit 1 year 16 weeks ago
Your prose is so fun, trippy: Your prose is so fun, trippy and effortlessly brilliant that I always go back for a second read.   An artfully casual indulgence.
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patriciajj commented on: Garden at Night by TheShadowKnows 1 year 16 weeks ago
You set the stage with: You set the stage with enchanting and enticingly dark imagery and then expressed piercingly raw pain with amazing prowess—stunts of language such as:   "A dream Cut away to protect the rest from annihilation"   And the final stunner:   "I taunt the sky and dare it to destroy me"   An immersive achievement. Loved every moment of it!  
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DaveBrowder commented on: Dreaming Into The Stars by DaveBrowder 1 year 16 weeks ago
Thank you!!: Thank you!!
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cynosure commented on: Tearless by cynosure 1 year 17 weeks ago
Thank you for your kind: Thank you for your kind words. Please forgive my belated response, my meurodivergence in combination with my overly loud inner critic make it near impossible to practice self compassion. 
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cynosure commented on: K.I. by cynosure 1 year 17 weeks ago
Thank you A : Thank you A 
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cynosure commented on: Einen Augenblick bitte! by cynosure 1 year 17 weeks ago
Thank you EventHorizon: Thank you EventHorizon
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Never Fails To Amaze Me by S74RW4RD 1 year 17 weeks ago
To what ever degree that is: To what ever degree that is true, I'm glad. Thank you for such a compliment, for sure.
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