truest frame

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2023

 

truest frame

 

 

 

~ imPRESSions ~

 

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patriciajj's picture

Another bite-sized

Another bite-sized masterpiece. The way you can successfully merge simplicity and sumptuous wordplay is astounding because it's deceptively difficult to be simple while there are so many pitfalls in being opulent.

 

This is a sweetly lyrical and profound creation that captures the passage of time in all its inner spectacle, and this line, in particular, left me wonderstruck:

 

"only truest gold remained"

 

I'm definitely a fan of your deft wordweaving.  

 
redbrick's picture

Sometimes one wonders if it

Sometimes one wonders if it is a kind of verbal starvation or articulative constraint. But either way, it makes for good exercise in literary expression. Wordweaving is a lifelong process of experimentation and learning. Thank you so much patriciajj, for your most welcome visit and review.


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