"Creativity is intelligence: "Creativity is intelligence having fun." —Albert Einstein.
You must have been having blast when you extracted this supreme intelligence combined with "jubilant and privileged delectation" from the ethereal. You went beyond the cosmic to the realm of creation and the first stirrings of life, before poetry was even a concept in the human mind.
To have creation, in all its visible and yet-to-be known splendor, address the Creator is your most astounding idea to date. The way you make our miniscule place in the unfathomable vastness seem at once like a speck of dust and the dearest thing to the heart of God is one of the best examples of the cosmological poetry you refer to.
And I'm completely in love with the word "Nearing" with all its factual references, nuances and profound implications. A stunning choice that changes everything. You also did a superb job weaving allusions into your grandeur.
I'm being honest here: I would be writing this same review even if this poem wasn't gifted to me. And what a gift! I accept with the greatest, heartfelt gratitude.
God bless you.
Battle In Dark And Light: Psychosis and severe depression need attention in this country. The entire industry was dusmantked in the 80's and in-mates thriwn out on the streets. They ended uo in correction facilities, job corps, anywhere they fit like hakf-way houses. .
Criminally insane and Schipzoids filled quotas in private owned prisons. The lucky ones found compasionate homes with friends/ relatives. Entire mental health hospitals closed, no one wanted to fund another overly populated poor.
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Hope u r okay.
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Metaphor As Football: .
A five yard completion would work for me, prnalties define the in-zone, wherever it is. A complete quarterback, no nickle and dimebacks is a clue. Wishing you a prosperous New Year. The Zone is out there somewhere. .
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Crematorium is quite close to my home: Crematorium is close to my home
By glassvan it takes 15-20 minutes. My parents ,grandma & guru have been cremated there. I trust in Ooperwala to send me a proper message when my call comes.
Thanks for your read