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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; The Cosmos Addresses Christ, Its Creator, In Whom It Consists by J-C4113D 2 years 41 weeks ago
"Creativity is intelligence: "Creativity is intelligence having fun." —Albert Einstein.   You must have been having blast when you extracted this supreme intelligence combined with "jubilant and privileged delectation" from the ethereal. You went beyond the cosmic to the realm of creation and the first stirrings of life, before poetry was even a concept in the human mind.   To have creation, in all its visible and yet-to-be known splendor, address the Creator is your most astounding idea to date. The way you make our miniscule place in the unfathomable vastness seem at once like a speck of dust and the dearest thing to the heart of God is one of the best examples of the cosmological poetry you refer to.    And I'm completely in love with the word "Nearing" with all its factual references, nuances and profound implications. A stunning choice that changes everything. You also did a superb job weaving allusions into your grandeur.    I'm being honest here: I would be writing this same review even if this poem wasn't gifted to me. And what a gift! I accept with the greatest, heartfelt gratitude.   God bless you. 
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allets commented on: Battleground by exthias1983 2 years 41 weeks ago
Battle In Dark And Light: Psychosis and severe depression need attention in this country. The entire industry was dusmantked in the 80's and in-mates thriwn out on the streets. They ended uo in correction facilities, job corps, anywhere they fit like hakf-way houses. . Criminally insane and Schipzoids filled quotas in private owned prisons. The lucky ones found compasionate homes with friends/ relatives. Entire mental health hospitals closed, no one wanted to fund another overly populated poor. . Hope u r okay. . Lady A .  
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georgeschaefer commented on: PERSISTENCE OF MEMORY by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks ago
It would be kind of cool to: It would be kind of cool to have more than one phallus.  If one wasn't working, the other one could step up.
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allets commented on: MASS TRANSIT DISTRACTIONS by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks ago
I Shall Go Guy Watching: And then while lamenting the loss I wll rejoice, my loss will be or is some lady's win-find. :D
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allets commented on: PENALTY FLAG by georgeschaefer 2 years 41 weeks ago
Metaphor As Football: . A five yard completion would work for me, prnalties define the in-zone, wherever it is. A complete quarterback, no nickle and dimebacks is a clue. Wishing you a prosperous New Year. The Zone is out there somewhere. . Lady A .  f
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TheKrook commented on: I’m Fine by TheKrook 2 years 42 weeks ago
Thank you for your words. : Thank you for your words. 
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TheKrook commented on: Nowhere by TheKrook 2 years 42 weeks ago
I’m late at responses : Thank you so much. 
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Starward commented on: Nobody by Tsenumaic 2 years 42 weeks ago
You state a universal human: You state a universal human problem very poignantly and succinctly.  The first two lines are especially striking.
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bishu commented on: bitter sweet by Morningglory 2 years 42 weeks ago
Merry Christmas Dearest Healing Lady: Killing the days, months and years on my cold potato couch oggling at TV and PC. Be safe. Be happy. God bless
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bishu commented on: Morning Light by bishu 2 years 42 weeks ago
Crematorium is quite close to my home: Crematorium is close to my home By glassvan it takes 15-20 minutes. My parents ,grandma & guru have been cremated there. I trust in Ooperwala to send me a proper message when my call comes.  Thanks for your read  
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bishu commented on: LOST by SWA 2 years 42 weeks ago
Sadness engulfs me: I pray for your soul to rest in eternal peace. I'll miss you my friend. 
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bishu commented on: । পঞ্চাশ by shawon1982 2 years 42 weeks ago
Daroon hoyeche: Bhalobashar rong dakha jayna. Shotto kotha. Bhalobashar lokti shamne ele buk dhip dhip anonondo. Bhalo thakben
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allets commented on: STAY MAD?! by georgeschaefer 2 years 42 weeks ago
Impressive Write: But title of folder is astounding @!?£ 
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Starward commented on: The Seven Sisters of Pleiades by saiom 2 years 42 weeks ago
I love astronomical poems,: I love astronomical poems, and this one is magnificent!!!
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Starward commented on: + 27.225 MHz: Epigrams For The Eve Of Christ's Nativity by J-C4113D 2 years 42 weeks ago
Thank you for those kind: Thank you for those kind words.  Merry Christmas.
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