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Starward commented on: Reply To A Comment From Lady A, A Poet Of Significance On Postpoems by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Thank you very much.  I: Thank you very much.  I thought the contrast between how and what I was at college, and how and what I am now (much different in appearance; but inwardly, not much changed, I think) would amuse them.  Thanks for the encouraging words.  I thought, yesterday, that posting it might be criticized as egotistical, but you have validated my decision.
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patriciajj commented on: After Worst by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
A clever way to describe our: A clever way to describe our new normal. Hopefully we won't run out of lights. 
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patriciajj commented on: Finally Spring by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
Sparkling eloquence and your: Sparkling eloquence and your signature wit (Rock'n that green!) make this the perfect celebration. Yes, it did feel like a lifetime of "too many/ snowy cold iced/ shiftings to arrive." You brought the feeling of renewal to life. 
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patriciajj commented on: Reply To A Comment From Lady A, A Poet Of Significance On Postpoems by J-C4113D 2 years 25 weeks ago
Your grandchildren will be: Your grandchildren will be proud, and I can imagine the stories they'll tell of the great barefoot poet who left such a beautiful, interesting and inspiring legacy. Always a pleasure to read your anecdotes, especially the ones that shocked a staid and bland Middle America. 
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patriciajj commented on: Alcoholism by saiom 2 years 25 weeks ago
I would love to say a vegan: I would love to say a vegan diet was an overnight cure for my addiction, but it took a personal crash landing to make me want to find freedom. I had to choose between my life and the bottle, and well, here I am. I will say that my diet helped quite a bit because a healthier body is an emotionally stronger body, and you really need some steady nerves to power through those first months.    Actually, years. For the rest of your life.    Even if a vegan diet didn't improve my health significantly, it's a wonderful feeling to leave the world a little more peaceful than I found it.    Important information here. 
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Molly commented on: Alcoholism by saiom 2 years 25 weeks ago
Me: I am.
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Starward commented on: READING ANAIS NIN by georgeschaefer 2 years 25 weeks ago
I applaud your courage in: I applaud your courage in writing about this.
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Starward commented on: Days of the Week by saiom 2 years 25 weeks ago
Christmas Saturday has long: Christmas Saturday has long fascinated me:  1976,  1982, 1993, 1999, 2004, 2010, 2021, 2027.  There are gaps of six, five, and eleven years.  In the early centuries of the Orthodox Faith, Easter's position with respect to the lunar calendar than prevalent in Judea has much more attestation in the Gospels than Christmas.  So, while Easter is a moveable feast---and the Good Friday/Easter Sunday custom, that we are used to is heavily attested to in Apostle John's Gospel---Christmas is not as well documented (not even mentioned by Mark and John), and was therefore given a fixed date.    When my birthday falls on a Thursday, there will be in that year a Christmas Saturday.  Because 1976 was such a significant year for me, personally, the synchronization of its dates in other years became important to me.  What I found was that pattern I described above---gaps of five, six and eleven years.  May I ask in what source you found the seven year gap mentioned in the penultimate line of your poem?  I could not find such a gap:  am I barking up the wrong tree?  Lol, am I even in the right neighborhood?
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Starward commented on: FALSE ZEN RIDDLE by georgeschaefer 2 years 25 weeks ago
This poem very successfully: This poem very successfully evokes a very eerie effect.
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allets commented on: A Few Hard Facts by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
We Write: We are writers who change worlds. ~A~ 
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allets commented on: A Co-Conspiracy of Matter by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
Elementary Life Class 101: Welcome to the art of living! yay! Cannot imagine life wirh no tactility. :D ~A~
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patriciajj commented on: What Next? by allets 2 years 25 weeks ago
So true. Good to see past the: So true. Good to see past the manipulation. 
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patriciajj commented on: Gates of Orion by patriciajj 2 years 25 weeks ago
I can't tell you how much: I can't tell you how much your support and appreciation means to me. Thank you again and again.   As a lifelong stargazer you must have noticed that the stars are fading as the years go by. One third the world (And 80% of Americans) can no longer see the Milky Way because of light pollution. This poem is a elegy for what we have lost.    Always an honor when a great talent stops by.     
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patriciajj commented on: Friend of Light by patriciajj 2 years 25 weeks ago
I can't tell you how much I: I can't tell you how much I enjoy your intricate interpretations of my work, and especially this one I gave as a gift to my best friend years ago. It means so much that you took the time to analyze it in such depth and appreciate it fully, because the friendship ended a few years back and left me feeling ambivalent about this poem.   After I saw a real Russian icon that was smuggled out of the Soviet Union at a time when Churches were being raided, I felt I had seen something truly holy; it was so beautiful, so enduring. I was offering my friend the highest praise in that line, so I'm thrilled that you recognized the significance of that word choice.   I'm always delighted when you pinpoint the stanzas that I wanted to function as a crescendo. My feelings (just a sense) dictates the position. I love it when the center turns out to actually be the center, and it happens to be a few words as one stanza, but it doesn't usually work out that way. I just go with what I "hear" in my head.    Thank you again for your deeply meaningful and amazing review. It makes all the difference. 
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Starward commented on: Still Point by adriannemerideth 2 years 25 weeks ago
The poem's reference to Old: The poem's reference to Old Possum is very impressive.
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