Finally Spring

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A New View

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A lifelong waited,

it seemed as if

it took too many

snowy cold iced

shiftings to arrive.

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Green is your

finest fashion

statement.

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Warm breeze,

should be, but is not,

your name.

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Lady A

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patriciajj's picture

Sparkling eloquence and your

Sparkling eloquence and your signature wit (Rock'n that green!) make this the perfect celebration. Yes, it did feel like a lifetime of "too many/ snowy cold iced/ shiftings to arrive." You brought the feeling of renewal to life. 

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All the midwest snow melted

I watched it, big flakes almost covering cars.  This is it! Spring  has sprung!


 

 

S74rw4rd's picture

Being a writer of science

Being a writer of science fiction, are you familiar with James Tiptree, Jr.?  For reasons I cannot explain, your poem reminded me of Tiptree's story, "The Last Flight Of Dr. Ain."  Your poem, which is beautifully colorful, set me to thinking and my warped brain went to Dr. Ain's last flight.


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allets's picture

Hugo Award Winner

No, did not read - some short stories long ago - Asimov era. Just a seasonal shift celebration.


 

 

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OK, thanks for the reply.

OK, thanks for the reply.


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You Are Welcome

Eyes stressed, keeping most replies short, postng less - and less. Jus fnishe re-reading Dragon Riders of Pern - 6 novels;marathon read. I wrote down @ 500 4-7 stllable words, mostly adverbs. May look up for alrernate denotations, abiut 10 root words I did not know. Mccaffrey's American-Irish. Died 2011.
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Lady A


 

 

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Thanks, I did not know she

Thanks, I did not know she had passed away.  When Tiptree suicided, I did not know that either.


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She

Alice Bradley Sheldon, unveiled , in 1977 that Jim Tiptree, Jr. was a woman. Looked her up: murder-suicde pact, 1987 shot husband (blind and an invalid)  then herself. A married lesbian.

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~A~