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Starward commented on: Nocturnes: Now That One Of Them Is Dead by J-C4113D 2 years 8 weeks ago
Thank you so very much: Thank you so very much indeed!
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Incompl commented on: Nocturnes: Now That One Of Them Is Dead by J-C4113D 2 years 8 weeks ago
"Can yours ever be the same: "Can yours ever be the same where you are?" I have never been able to put this haunting sentiment into words. how you made grief sound so beautiful! 
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Starward commented on: mercy call by catherine 2 years 8 weeks ago
I feel like that about every: I feel like that about every other day, and twice on Saturdays!
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Starward commented on: Speakeasy by Incompl 2 years 8 weeks ago
I likw how the thirteenth: I likw how the thirteenth line seems to stabilize the poem's process only for the last line to disrupt it so dramatically.
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Incompl commented on: Eternal Morsel by allets 2 years 8 weeks ago
She stays faithful to us and: She stays faithful to us and still scorned. thinking of you fondly Lady A and as always, comforted by your words. 
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Incompl commented on: Relief by life_used_to_be... 2 years 8 weeks ago
Every line was perfect : I love the horror in "I am there when your hair stands up" Haunting people while we are alive. I hope are well!! 
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Starward commented on: Sunburn by Incompl 2 years 9 weeks ago
Through the metaphor you have: Through the metaphor you have deployed, you compress a profound meaning, and an implied backstory, into such a small space---always a sign of classic talent.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer On Psalm 56:3 by J-C4113D 2 years 9 weeks ago
Trust me, it's a joy and a: Trust me, it's a joy and a privilege to express my impressions of your work.  
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patriciajj commented on: Old Dog by Incompl 2 years 9 weeks ago
Thanks to Starward, I found: Thanks to Starward, I found your endearingly relatable and inviting poem. The charming metaphor is perfectly tailored to the experience and the delightful style. A joy to read.  
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Starward commented on: Sad for Almost a Full Hour by chillin 2 years 9 weeks ago
It does resolve.  By small: It does resolve.  By small steps or large, it does resolve.  The worst year of my life was 1981:  I had earned, the year before, a useless college degree; my parents would not help me with further tuition; my first job, recruited out of college, ended in failure as soon as it began; my then fiancee dumped me; and I came back to my parents home, tail between legs, to be taken in like a charity case (and they reminded me of this constantly).  I found a job in early 1982, and though it started rough, by early 1983, things began to turn my way.   One normally does not think of how fast the earth turns, or swings around the sun; or that the sun is swinging around the edge of the galaxy---three circular motions that, except for the change of day and night, and the change of seasons, we cannot register on our senses.  Yet those movements are always ongoing, and each is considerably small in scale compared to the next one.  The movements in our life continue like that, and, by small or large, ultimately resolve the issues.
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Starward commented on: Winning and Loosing by chillin 2 years 9 weeks ago
This poem certainly gives: This poem certainly gives eerie expression to that sense of vulnerability.
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Incompl commented on: Old Dog by Incompl 2 years 9 weeks ago
Aw shucks, thank you. This is: Aw shucks, thank you. This is too on the dogs nose, heh, in my own life right now. I'm glad that it came across that way. 
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Prayer On Psalm 56:3 by J-C4113D 2 years 9 weeks ago
Wow!  I don't even have the: Wow!  I don't even have the words to respond to this.  I feel very humble in the face of such a marvelous compliment.  And the understanding and comprehension you bring to my poems goes beyond my wildest dreams.  Thank you for making this day so much brighter than it, otherwise, would have been.
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Starward commented on: Work In Progress by chillin 2 years 9 weeks ago
This poem presents profound: This poem presents profound emotion and wisdom intertwined.  I really enjoyed it.
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Starward commented on: Old Dog by Incompl 2 years 9 weeks ago
This gives a unique: This gives a unique expression to what is, I suspect, a process of change experienced by multitudes of people who may not even be able to notice it---let alone articulate it in metaphor as well as you have done here.
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