Old Dog

My heart is an old dog on a chain

Now I’m free but I’m not for wandering 

The worlds too cold for an old dog like me, 

do you remember the little devil I used to be?

That wicked laugh that you once shook to hear 

I’m laughing and you’re no longer here 

Untied me and told me to get on 

One last look at the place I was bound

Dragged the chain til the grass all wore away 

Made friends with whatever kept me out the rain 

Dreamt where I’d finally go free 

Broke loose but now I’m not for wandering

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patriciajj's picture

Thanks to Starward, I found

Thanks to Starward, I found your endearingly relatable and inviting poem. The charming metaphor is perfectly tailored to the experience and the delightful style. A joy to read.  

S74rw4rd's picture

This gives a unique

This gives a unique expression to what is, I suspect, a process of change experienced by multitudes of people who may not even be able to notice it---let alone articulate it in metaphor as well as you have done here.


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Incompl's picture

Aw shucks, thank you. This is

Aw shucks, thank you. This is too on the dogs nose, heh, in my own life right now. I'm glad that it came across that way. 


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