Relief

Winter came 

and it changed the stars in my eyes

 

I wait for you to see. 

 

there is a hard darkened shadow here, 

one where you can feel the atoms bouncing 

 And I am there when your hair stands up 

 

fear. confusion. It's all the same gnawing tooth

 

I want you to look

 

and you do. You watch that train take me away

 

not even a wave of remorse for

taking my stars from me. 

 

 

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Every line was perfect

I love the horror in "I am there when your hair stands up" Haunting people while we are alive. I hope are well!! 


Let your teeth show