Winter came
and it changed the stars in my eyes
I wait for you to see.
there is a hard darkened shadow here,
one where you can feel the atoms bouncing
And I am there when your hair stands up
fear. confusion. It's all the same gnawing tooth
I want you to look
and you do. You watch that train take me away
not even a wave of remorse for
taking my stars from me.
Every line was perfect
I love the horror in "I am there when your hair stands up" Haunting people while we are alive. I hope are well!!
Let your teeth show