Sunburn

My eyes do not dart from hers  

it feels like looking straight at the sun

blue eyed and golden petaled 

I cannot help but turn her way 

lost in the night 

I could bloom in the dark

basking only in her validation 

I could burn 

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Through the metaphor you have

Through the metaphor you have deployed, you compress a profound meaning, and an implied backstory, into such a small space---always a sign of classic talent.


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