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Starward commented on: The Weaver by jenfool 1 year 35 weeks ago
Although your note to it says: Although your note to it says "unfinished," and I would never disrespect your authority as the Poet who wrote this, the Poem seems to me to be very much complete, packing tremendous meaning into four short lines.  The great, but now often neglected American Poet. J. V. Cunningham, stated that a compacted poem, like yours, show classic talent; and I think your poems bears that out.  It contains so much in such a small space. 
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cynosure commented on: 2 AM hunger pangs by cynosure 1 year 35 weeks ago
Thank you for your empathy: Thank you for your empathy and understandin. Poverty is, and most probably  has always been, a political choice.
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patriciajj commented on: Thinking about my drinking history by humanfruit 1 year 35 weeks ago
With a kaleidoscope of: With a kaleidoscope of imagery, you certainly captured the tumultuous journey with all its "Still intricacies, enticements alluring" and that femme fatale of escape that calls "with red, whispering lips". Your metaphorical sorcery is amazing!   For me, alcohol was a merciless tyrant, and I find the battle preferable to the bondage. I can absolutely relate to your depictions in this stunning tapestry. Powerful stuff.   
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patriciajj commented on: Untitled 23 by rachel 1 year 35 weeks ago
"When the misery is still: "When the misery is still there But no longer defines you   What is that called?"   The definition is new every morning, but always something a little better than yesterday.    There's so much power tucked into this relatable expression of struggle and those small victories that add up to ultimate triumph. I love the way you acknowledge this truth by spotlighting the way you get out of bed anyway and celebrate the tiny miracles that you do have in your life.   An inspiring example of growth, and as ewbonitz said, "acceptance".  
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patriciajj commented on: pinch and a punch by arqios 1 year 35 weeks ago
The constraints of time keep: The constraints of time keep me from giving your brilliant collection the attention it deserves, but I'm always delightfully stunned when I do pop in. This heart-clutching memorial is everything a tribute should be. With a sharp eye for emotive details and your familiar prowess, you brought the feelings home.    Excellent as always. 
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patriciajj commented on: WHEN MINDS ARE CLOSED AND BOOKS ARE BANNED by joy 1 year 35 weeks ago
Joining you in protest: Joining you in protest against the neo-nazi style practice of book banning that is flagrantly being practiced in our nation. We absolutely should rail against it because, as you very eloquently proclaimed:    " a book has no ability to make us think to stir our imagination… no power to inspire… when it is closed."   A well-penned call to keep books (and minds) open. 
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patriciajj commented on: 2 AM hunger pangs by cynosure 1 year 35 weeks ago
Any society that allows the: Any society that allows the destitution you powerfully described cannot call itself enlightened. I've heard every excuse for why we allow it, but the fact is, it's a humanitarian crisis and it's unacceptable. A very important message. 
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Starward commented on: My Thoughts to Grandpa by justshan1983 1 year 35 weeks ago
The great British actor,: The great British actor, Peter Cushing, had a very devout Faith, which helped him deal with the passing of his beloved wife.  When, during an interview, a journalist told him, "I'm sorry for your loss," he replied, courteously and with a smile, "I haven't lost her, I know exactly where she is.  She just isn't right here at the moment."  I think he also believed that being apart from our deceased loved ones is like being on the same railroad but in different depots and on different trains, but all headed to a great destination.  Sometime after her passing, botanists in England cultivated a new species of Rose, and named it for Helen Cushing.
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Starward commented on: i forgot to take my medicine by ewbonitz 1 year 35 weeks ago
I have to take many pills: I have to take many pills too, to counteract or regulate my body's cotinued physical collapse.  I sometimes resent it, but I realize they emable to me to enjoy, to an extent, what moments of happiness still remain for me.
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Starward commented on: Dear Little Evan, #13 by ewbonitz 1 year 35 weeks ago
The beauty of this series, a: The beauty of this series, a beauty well demonstrated in this entry, is that it is both the sum of its parts, and more than the sum of its parts.  By the sum of its parts, I mean that so many of your statements or phrases could stand independently as aphorisms---a mighty fine talent to have (and one I baldly lack, therefore I admire it the more in those who have it).  But then, they all work together to become each entry, which then become the whole series---so this is the aspect that is more than the sum of its parts.
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georgeschaefer commented on: BLOOD COUSIN by georgeschaefer 1 year 35 weeks ago
would that I could go back in: would that I could go back in time and get a blood transfusion from Rimbaud
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Starward commented on: At Pleasant Recollection by S74rw4rd 1 year 35 weeks ago
No excuse is possible for: No excuse is possible for this late of a response to acknowledge your complimentary comment.
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Starward commented on: Promises and Suggestive Plans by choirgrrl 1 year 35 weeks ago
This is a wonderful poem.: This is a wonderful poem.
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Starward commented on: the number of two by choirgrrl 1 year 35 weeks ago
This reminds me so much of: This reminds me so much of weekend nights with my First Beloved during the summer of 1976; the words of your poem brought all those memories to the forefront.
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Starward commented on: heather grasped in hesitation by ewbonitz 1 year 35 weeks ago
This can't have been easy to: This can't have been easy to write, but I applaud your poetic skill while acknowledging the sorrow this elegy conveys.
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