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cynosure commented on: Own You Owe You by tallsquirrelgirl 1 day 15 hours ago
Compelling write: This poem is a beautiful exploration of attraction, desire and power complexities. I was quite taken with the imagery of "styrofoam matchstick earthquake girl", which created a vivid and unique picture. The repetition of "too many" and the contrast between wanting to own and owe someone adds depth to the emotions portrayed. The references to frequencies and vibrations add a musical quality to the poem. I felt this poem enhances the emotional impact and that makes it such a compelling read. Powerful and evocative, thank you. Brilliant work!
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Pingus commented on: Sandwich (2024 challenge day 32) by tallsquirrelgirl 1 day 23 hours ago
Not so challenging, it would appear: Hey, these little Poetry 'challenges' of yours are paying off so divinely the result I cant stop myself from savoring the beauty and truth of your sweet, despairing sandwiches. But so delicious, and well worth the trip to the grocery store, you know, for more and more.
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Pingus commented on: One for the money, two for the show by Teytonon 1 day 23 hours ago
Literally shit on a biscuit: Dude, stop posting this shit and learn to write, like actually.
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weepingwoman commented on: D's Critique/Analysis of... by weepingwoman 2 days 9 hours ago
D's Favorite Lines... :     of the moment...  subtexted Res Ipsa Loquitur... subjected to Tabula Rasa... at D's whim & fancy...  I forever take refuge...  sway with me baby... you put the lighter inside this man... you're so fine, lose my mind and the world seems to disappear... oh girl I'll build your wishing well... and I'll fix your old beat-up Chevy truck and make it run like new again... your mountain of firewood isn't big enough... I'll be back tomorrow with more... of whatever you need... I'm here to take care of all your problems even before you have them...  the love you've got is only all the love that I would ever need... I'm your huckleberry... exactly the way Val says it... and I'm you're daisy Doc... damn you look good in that hat... tuckle up yourself with me... find what you love and let it kill you... all sciences are not the wisdom true... many seeming thats are not THE That... many trees bear nought of fruit... make lonely caves thy home paternal... and solitude thy paradise... omvajrasattvasamaya... Hail Mary Full of Grace...  
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S74RW4RD commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem Afrer Matthew 6:10 by S74RW4RD 2 days 10 hours ago
Thank you very muxh.: Thank you very muxh.
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osiriss- commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem Afrer Matthew 6:10 by S74RW4RD 3 days 4 hours ago
Lord, I pray this man has: Lord, I pray this man has life and love for all the ages to come
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osiriss- commented on: Right Here With You by DaveBrowder 3 days 5 hours ago
I really like your poetry: I really like your poetry
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weepingwoman commented on: Circular File #2 by weepingwoman 5 days 3 hours ago
these have already been sifted through... :       to question my virtue is an act of treason...  him and the imp are doing an act at McKenna's Treehouse...  hey look madlibs... in the back of the closet...  Christian LaCroix for the House of My Sweet Dakini... pink patent leather...  vegan... with white polka dots... in the back of the closet... hey D I found a hole in the back of the closet... I'm sure that's where they're coming in... hey where did those queer eye guys go... now I lay me down to sleep...  I heard he can do this thing with his tongue...  she can do it with anything... just give her 1 line... I can't find my voice... I think she left it over by the well... has anyone seen D's gloves... oh no girl those are real... there were 3 of them... Tyrion to the set of 300...  tell Hagrid to bring in the Medusa... she definitely seems to be experiencing some sort of... tell him I don't want to talk about my mother anymore... who let him in here... he got it from Biff... he's not a real doctor... I found this stethoscope over by the well... she thinks she can control it... no Hunter you tell her she can't have another piece of birthday cake ... 3000 degrees... found on Mars... in her desk in her cave... in the Himalayas... is that some new guy she's dating... no he's gay... Enhancing Lotion over on aisle 3... looks like peanut butter to me... it's completely unintelligible... undecipherable... nah that's right... who's the new guy... I think his name is Miketoo... we need to hose her down... bring the pink elephant to me... too hot... too cold... fever of 3000 degrees... call Dr. Jones... could be Atlantean in origin... she has relatives there... I thought you burned that letter... she won't open it... not even the baby aspirin... probst called... snookie called... there's a situation under the whomping willow... call the creepy grounds keeper... Scooby Doo Be Doo... where are you... I found this mystery machine keychain... the dam is about to break... we need another box of Kleenex... here's the little Dutch boy... finally took his finger out of the damn dam... regularly scheduled programming...  there's a twister coming... and it's heading my way... sometimes I grow so tired... dinner with Led Zeppelin... at Johnny's place... on the island of Eros... ramble on... nows the time... the time is now... wake up D! you fell asleep for a minute and a half... we had a pact... Johnny called...  he needs us... spotted on the island of Eros... at the reopening of the viper room... vip only...  blue feather boas for the whole audience...  and spotted faux fur snow lion lined gloves... hey check out the gift bag... look it's the mother of undying time... on the red carpet...  with the gatekeeper to the unknown... at the Dakini-themed met gala... I will be your shepherd in the night... say it 3 times... and click your heels together...  don't give that to her... it's too early... can't be imitated... a new kind of comedy... surfing the zuvuya... Aquaman called... no that didn't work either... oh no she just pulled the devil card... ai o dios mio... and the hierophant... that's good right... who's the knight of swords... is that some new guy she's dating... Daario Naharis called... which one... nevermind send them both in... he pledges his sword to you... we should check IMDB ... or Wikipedia... or HBO... do not Google him... we'll have to shut production down for the day... GoT marathon... whoop whoop ... honey grab that jar of peanut butter... look it's that cute delivery boy again... Grandmeister Tarley called... they need a new props guy at the wall... aieee she pulled the I've known you for lifetimes oracle card... so romantic... stop trying to force feed me... we could watch GoT and HotD at the same time...   and ozzy found this in her underwater grotto on the island of Eros: §∆¥€E=Mπ√¢£∆¥€^√π¥€¢∆£¥€∆§π√✓✓✓^°1+1=3@#$$$$$$$  
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weepingwoman commented on: The Pink Portal by weepingwoman 5 days 10 hours ago
finally we have a title... :     personally I like "The Pink Dakini Sutra"...    
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weepingwoman commented on: what did you say your name was... by weepingwoman 5 days 11 hours ago
RE: RE: The Dailies... : what there's no more room on your desk... and he's all soapy... yes the Dakini Pink one... from the Domestic Goddess cafe... with white polka dots... & Laundrymat... yeah that doesn't look right... at Gordon Ramsay's Dakini-themed restaurant... at Walt Disney's Dakini-themed Theme Park... on Venus... thank Kali for cut n paste... you know there's an app that'll do that for you...  I heard he was doing such a great job they gave him another line... Scriptboy!... let's watch... can she carry her notebook piled 6 inches high with her days notes... and her pipe and the Dante's Inferno ...  and the Pepto, and her [insert name of D's favorite cocktail]... Pepto mixed with ?... Amrit Nectar... girl that sounds delicious...  what should we call it... 10 inches high... will she make it from the kitchen to the bedroom... without making 2 trips... while juggling? bricks, chainsaws... dammit I need another set of arms... down to my last gummy... yeah that doesn't look right.. he's wearing her apron...  we don't need dishes, hell we don't even need to eat... if we quit eating we won't need dishes... Dakini seen sipping a glowing pink drink at Studio 54... always keep em guessing D... they'll never know where we'll show up... or toilet paper... next... you do see what's happening here honey... has anybody seen the vial of Basilisk venom... we're looking for a bigger shoebox ... oh my god Ms D... when's the last time you cleaned in here girl... no wonder she gots mice... wake up D!... Johnny just called... he needs us, we gotta go... lacks plotline & focus... woman in a bright yellow kimono and blue feather boa... seen crying at the feet of... the Virgin Mary statue... at the Catholic Church in Taylor... on the bulletin board...  at the Country Store on Concho Hwy... Dakini Seeks... I heard she was looking for a plumber... found the notes she took while her dad was dying... save it for the biopic... yeah we're gonna have to build a bigger boat for that shot... I heard he got a promotion... Lady Gaga partying with Kali and Christian Siriano at Studio 54 after the McQueen show... reorder gummies... it's a failsafe system D... a great way to organize your thoughts... you should try it missus... this isn't the mitchell hedges skull... he looks like Lord Varys, but he sounds like Ramsey Snow... I think it's ay.. almost out of gummies... you will bring it to me Dr. Jones... she needs to hit the J harder... we're out of that... try some of the Oreoz & Birthday Cake...  no that one doesn't work for her anymore... "touch your lips just so I know"... I didn't know Dave was in town... oh no Hunter, we're down to our last gummie... yeah that doesn't look right... I'll split it with you... you take it D, I'm still reeling from the experiment at La Chorrera... "Crash into me baby..."... put lighters and bananas on the list... "and I'll come into you..."... oh no hide the Super Buff Cherry... is that what she's calling it now... and these are from over by the well... some of them are wet... milady a mixtape has arrived for you from 1984... the return address says Anthony, Hollin Hall, VA... she still has naked pics of him... how big is it... he's doing the dishes... "Hello it's me"... "I'll stop the world and melt with you"... send it back... in big pink letters... yeah that's a pretty obscure reference, they're not gonna get that... She + T 4ever... and these were on the kitchen table....  under 6 months of mail... I say they lack vision...  and your name sounds like it's a nasal passage irrigation system...  go decapitate him Kali... you're sure Mistress... my sword is yours... ommanipadmehum... yeah there were like 10,000 of those... tayataombekhandzebekhandze... and those too... what language is that... Portuguese? Swahili?... Swahili sounds funnier... have wardrobe send samples of yellow silk to... dammit this pen is running out of... The McKenna Center for Psychedelic Psilocybin Psychical Research... & Studies... & Biosphere of rare psychoactive plants... and rare books... reorder Dante's Inferno and Devil's Mistress... forgive me father for I have sinned... and Dark Rainbow... and Indy found this under the whomping willow... I waited but you never came... oh she came honey just not there...  and not with him... here's a note from Ms D... I don't know why I didn't come... and these are from yesterday... relax missus we don't gotta be anywhere for like 2 weeks...  you were supposed to be taking notes...  Everyone was at Studio 54...  seen walking into Studio 54 dressed like an Egyptian...  he left a bottle on the counter... he named it after her... aieee like the song... My Sweet Dakini's Delight... it's so romantic... and just look at that color... yeah that still doesn't look right... doing the twist with Ms D and DD and DL and We like they did last summer...  oh no she just pulled The Tower card...  you should come with us sometime Mr. E...  oh no she found his picture in a shoebox in the closet...  the one that was ducttaped shut...  yeah that doesn't look right...  when she was cleaning...  girl that is not what she was doing in there...  it tastes just like the Boone's Farm Tickle Pink we used to drink when she was a teenager... decapitated body found in Silver Creek... State Farm is there... and for godssakes don't let her watch Jersey Shore... aieee that Pauly D... girl that hair... Pauly D spotted at CBGBs with Ms D and DD and DL and G&T and We... no it's not too much... yeah that doesn't look right... can someone please check the spelling on "CBGBs"... Liza waltzes alone at Studio 54... "Where'd Everybody go?"... did you leave her by herself again... honey you can't do that... but the dishes... where the fuck is Johnny with the Amrit Nectar... I'm going to Walmart for more Nutella... and batteries... someone try and pry that spoon out of her hand... mouth?... hey Jake from State Farm... somebody needs to take that jar outside... Ms D said not to touch it... fucking hell... My Sweet Dakini reveals... at the McQueen show... "I'm speechless"... dammit... there's green fur growing on it... a thousand pens in this... the skull does not speak to everyone it seems... house and not one... of them... works... her mom used to say that... we will turn you into us... you won't even know it's happening...  Indiana Jones it's about time you showed up...  Johnny call Brad, see if he can get the McKenna Brothers for the Belize job... and Survivor...    
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weepingwoman commented on: what did you say your name was... by weepingwoman 5 days 11 hours ago
RE: RE: The Dailies... : here's the ones from brunch with Hunter and Terence... no missus mice cannot go through walls... Dinklage called...  he wants in on the Belize job...  aieee it does sound funny...  no D mice cannot go through walls... it's a lot bigger than you'd think...  oh no honey that old thing broke...  so Ms. Everyone...  I had a nice time with you the other night...  wave it at anything that slithers... up in the balcony at Studio 54... this whole place is slithering... that was me... we can do that again sometime if you want to... tell Hunter to build that better mousetrap already... I have to pee... she might need to cast a new handyman... I have to pee... you get the ruler, I'll grab the measuring tape... I heard he got a gig playing a Tyke at McKenna's Treehouse... I have to pee... Jack Sparrow I knew the wind would blow you... pause it... and grab the bag of SkinnyPop on your way... back to me someday... oh no D's gone... a touch of destiny... I have to pee... how'd she get out... get over here now... the Black Dread and the Pink Elephant are throwin' down in the parking lot outside of Westeros... we don't know... we were at the auditions for her handyman... I heard it makes perfect sense if you read it backwards... James Joyce called... plus eleven called from the upside-down... brunch with The Demogorgon... entire cast of Stranger Things...  and the Targaryens... seen at Gordon Ramsay's etc etc... at Walt Disney's etc etc... Ms D is it true that your book only makes sense if you read it upside-down... golden tickets to The Upside-Down Dakini-themed Rollercoaster Ride... she's got a ticket to ride... and I don't care... yeah I think it's she don't care... no it's he don't care... we should Google it... it's been rewritten by Queen John ... no its ok he likes to be called that... I thought it was Ser Elton... EJ called, he wants to play the part of... this is not happe... to say THEY don't care... yes Dakini mice can go through walls... and then we saw the mushroom cloud go up... he called it a masterpiece... here's to the gods of tits & wine... yeah that doesn't look right... we should Google it...   and Indy found this note under the whomping willow...  should I stay or should I go now...  and these are the footnotes for scene 12,367... fucking 7 hells...  the Pink Elephant is missing from its paddock...  that costume looks so good on you Ms D...  and Hagrid found this note... in flamingo blood...  of Hell's Kitchen Season 666...  I don't think there's an apostrophe in that... fuck off and get out of my kitchen... on the menu for the opening night... the Pink Elephant is MINE!... oh no girl that is real, I saw it on Instagram this morning... uh-oh she put on the Mrs. Maisel...  yeah that doesn't look right...  we're done for the day...  oh look girl Priscilla Queen of the Desert is on Tubi... ain't you done yet... here come Mister... I gotta have somebody right now... Mister want another look at you... turn around... don't talk back to me... you do what I tell you... and The Color Purple... you want something gal... D had an Aunt named Olivia ... girl that does not belong in this segment... you gonna buy anything or not gal... I just couldn't keep him off me... he tried everything... you know how he is... sure is a nice dress you have on... nothing but death can keep me from it...  you cut me and I'll kill ya...  it's gonna rain on your head .... it does sound a little like the theme to Jurassic Park... I need me a man, you hear me... you never have to worry about dead batteries again... doordash delivers... we should get that... who's doordash, is that some new guy she's dating... where are you going, we haven't watched Priscilla Queen of the Desert yet... Don called... drinks with Roger at the Algonquin... now get me some more of that bubblin' oil... and put it in this here tub... she went to see if she left the hose on over by the well... folks don't like nobody bein' too proud or too free... sistah you've been on my mind... sistah we're two of a kind, I'm keeping my eyes on you... sistah that headpiece... she said she left her gloves over by the well... did you see that... there it did it again... what did you call me...  it twitched... but then when she pulled that purple crayon out of the pencil case that her dad gave to her for her 3rd name day I knew...  you got this girl... after the Cleopatra awards... oh look there's an Elizabeth Taylor marathon on the bootube channel...  at least we finally got the pen out of her hand... it ran out of ink like 2 weeks ago... girl don't tell her that, I said it was filled with invisible ink Hunter got from Samwise Tarley at the Citadel...  no he got a promotion... he's working at The Wall now...  he demanded they let the wildling girl stay... and the babe... he threatened to call Khal Jon Snow... and have him send that blue-eyed giant across the Narrow Sea... Louis Louis, we gotta go... nahnahnahnahnah wake up D! you fell asleep for 30 seconds... we made a pact ... Johnny called... he needs us... we gotta go... she had to go back for it... what it was that expensive... Hunter brought it all the way back from the 1970s for her... some head shop around the corner from CBGBs... hmmm extralinguistic... girl you did not just let her get on dictionary.com... how can I fit that in somewhere... Don I'm over here... what I like wearing the rabbit suit... smells like popcorn... girl don't say it ... call Biff tell them we need more gobbledygook for Scene xyz... yeah that doesn't look right...  no that's right... #42 Increase... Book of Changes... we are being helped... heart steady, free of desire... imagine that you are sitting naked at the top of a snowy mountain... during a fierce blizzard... yes it's real, I saw it on Instagram this morning... did you see the one where she was levitating... with David Blaine... oh I saw him on YouTube, he can do this trick... and keep your attention... unwaveringly on your breath... in out in out... oh Don you're as good as they say... has anybody seen my Cleo award... you left it at my place... why don't you come over here and get it...  it's Cleopatra Award... nah that's right... the state of distraction has 4 causes... #1 many activities and tasks...  #2 despised enemies... oh honey she's gonna have to give up this practice right now...  #3 loving friends... just take that bookmark out... #4 distractions with no specific focal point... hide it... they kicked us out... over at the Sherry Netherland... no we can't go...  Hunter said not to leave her alone...  Liza seen entering the Sherry Netherland wearing... the ruby slippers... Everyone spotted... yeah we need some other word for spotted... girl grab her quick before she hits enter... the faux fur snow lion wrap... from the new Stella McCartney line... I'm wearing Christian Siriano... for House of My Sweet Dakini... you did not just let her on thesaurus.com... no she likes it better over at power thesaurus... more of a selection... and Indy found this over by the whomping willow... this life be over soon, Heaven last for always... is that written in flamingo blood...   
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sweetwater commented on: November Chills. by sweetwater 5 days 16 hours ago
Thank you so much Starward,: Thank you so much Starward, I'm not familiar with the poem you mention, I will look it up I'm intrigue. :-)
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weepingwoman commented on: Memo to Taj@Vanguard by weepingwoman 6 days 4 min ago
Hey Taj@Vanguard... :     go Google "gigantic jets spotted over Himalayas"... and then come back here and tell me my lighter idea is a bad one...    
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sweetwater commented on: The Moment by Wordman 6 days 4 hours ago
Absolutely beautiful, those: Absolutely beautiful, those images are stunning. Loved every word. X
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sweetwater commented on: The Chill Of Spring. by sweetwater 6 days 4 hours ago
Thank you, that's very kind.: Thank you, that's very kind.  Wish they came as easily as they used to though. :-)
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