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The Moment
I wait the moment when day whispers goodbye
in beauty, with palette’s smear of orange and gold
before the moon announces her majesty, reminding shadows
they are born in her smile, and they fall at her mercy
the kiss of day to night, as eternal lovers meet once more
a never-ending romance balanced by time, and its passing
rapture of touch known only for these fleeting moments
both joy and sadness paint the sky in their brief embrace
I wait the moment when night whispers goodbye
in the new peek of tomorrow and a glorious awakening
when parting lovers steal the smile from the day
traveling in search of that moment divine
Just gorgeous! Expertly
Just gorgeous! Expertly done
I have so many day_night lovers poems i can day hand on my heart this is simply gorgeous and affecting from start to finish.
Wonderfully wrought an ageless theme in a flawless frame. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
It's always a pleasure when
It's always a pleasure when you stop by, thank you for the visit, and the kind words. Coming from you that is hearty praise indeed. Hugssss back.
Your use of entrancing,
Your use of entrancing, mood-altering atmosphere injects so much power into this romantic escape. The clash of emotions in "the kiss of day to night" when "both joy and sadness paint the sky in their brief/ embrace" was particularly effective.
What also makes this work so well is the beguiling images and sense of place that speak for the ecstasy, the union, of the lovers and all else is left to the imagination. What is not said is glorious, open-ended . . . pure magic.
Encore!
Thank you for your favorable
Thank you for your favorable comment, and for the validation of what I try to express. I highly regard your voice on my pages and your support. Again, thank you, glad you enjoyed this.
I love the imagery of this poem.
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thank you, I'm glad you
thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this, thanks for the read.