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kisses soft against my legs, in circles
like the sweetness of your morning hug
leisurely pacing your way to my toes
as if tasting each one, carrying me to the place only we know,
i'm a million miles away, and yet feel you so close
next time i open my eyes, your hand like a mountain stream flows,
the touch feels like heaven as your body slides up,
and i kiss every inch that i can as you clutch
then loosen your hold to my hips now in time,
your tongue on my breasts, this is more than sublime,
enraptured i offer my hands to your pleasure
and to my surprise you decsend again, my breath answers
a sigh is released from its place deep within,
the sound seems to stroke you, as if you've gone in
i feel chills down my spine and then up again
and i reach for your legs, and more kissing begins
your chin at my pelvis, and now there is thrust
making love to these parts we become like a chorus
inspirations are deep and our bodies begin to roam
heart and soul timing, like a precise metrodome
a plateau of pleasure, escalation does entice
we kneel face to face just to breathe the love from each other's eyes
then you reach for my face with both hands and we kiss
with angels' wings donned we revel deep into bliss
the breathing is faster, we grapple and vie
as i guide you by the hand, and upon me you lie
like raindrops from heaven, joined in blissful suspension
and we lay with the stars, the aftermath of ascension
flesh on our flesh you lean close as i drift
and i feel lips on my eyelids
as i think ...'it gets no better than this'.
12:45 PM 7/16/2013 ©
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I myself love writing just these kind of poems.......
As so many have no idea what true love making is like unless someone gives them an idea as to how it is suppose to be and we poets are guides for just such a job. Amazing piece. Beautifully done. Life is even more lovely when one is able to beaufify the act of making love.
Consider such work the counter balance to porn..............Most Sincerely, Melissa
Thank you Melissa, but as you
Thank you Melissa, but as you may well know---words cannot begin to express the beauty and bliss--- 'utter complete oneness with another'. I tried to be explicit and as descriptive as I could without offending anyone, and yet when recall these moments in memory, words fail me, and I have only gratitude to have been so blessed to have experiences that balanced my own horrid and very real negative ones. ~thank you!~ xo
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Total enticement...I don't
Total enticement...I don't think I'm allowed to read things like this. That's why I read it twice and made a copy of it. Hi Elizabeth..
Hahaha!! Yes, sex can be a
Hahaha!! Yes, sex can be a very beautiful form of expressing love. Even when we don't refer to it as 'making love'. It still can have all the same qualities. Depends on the people doing it. Hope you found it appropriate for this site, and I am glad you were not offended. ~peace~
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
I like how descriptive you
I like how descriptive you are!
greater love has no one than this: to lay down one's life for one's friends
Thank you so much,
Thank you so much, ScandalofGrace! :-)
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Both Cevance & palewingedpoetess Are Gone
But their words live here and I am glad and agree - beautiful and sensitive and appropriate anywhere. Better words. Inclusive - allets -