Radiant Dawn

Darkness illuminates a hopeless heart
Deepens burdens that come on nightly visit
Dreaming is but meager rescue
Chased by shadows within an archaic masquerade
Should the nights vex fools forever so

 

She felt a touch while he was running
Aglow the sky where daggers tend to fly
Pierce the flesh of those just walking by
A question needs an answer, why
When she starts meaning her goodbye
He winds down to turn and sigh
Wonders if their love will really win
Yet all the curtains are closing in

 

I’ve felt the fire, I’ve drowned within the rain
I lay, despite the pain, loving her in utter vain
She’s a soaring bird, no wind to tame her
Roam whichever way desires, beauty

 

while Love,
Everlastingly will ember,
Within my dormant heart .

e.a.

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soulstonic's picture

Nice structure. This has more

Nice structure. This has more rhythm to it making it a lot easier to read and flow with. Very elegant and leaves me wanting :)

I love it! Great write.

~Soul