I noticed the little things first;
Like the way his eyes crinkled when he smiled
And the way his smile seemed to have a way to put me at ease.
Even though you were shy around me, I felt as if it weren't a bad thing. At least I knew I made you feel something,
really feel.
Well I really loved the way you always had a better compliment, and everyday proved that you were the winner of our silly little arguments
And slowly,
Like how the clouds shed drops of water during a drizzle,
And how ones eyelids shut after such a tiring day;
I started thinking about it.
About you.
And eventually, it came at once. The heavy downpour and the deepest slumber of them all.
But it didn't matter.
Cause around him;
my body itched to dance in the rain
And each time I woke up
My mind begged to sleep again.
Good feeling
I love to read when a woman can and does express love, affection and complement the man she cares about.
Well written.
I like your poem you have
I like your poem you have written here, good write and read.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57