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Here are Your Roses

Ugonna Wachuku   

 

I am back to you again.
I am here once again to
let you know my thoughts:

 

On moonlit roads to home
and yesterday, you walk
to the beat of my heart.
And I too walk to the
beat of your humane
heart.

 

On lush landscapes of new
love and hopeful life, you
plant rainbow colours on
clouds of my being.

 

Tomorrow, when soaring
eagles meet us on the
mountain top, you shall
lovingly ask me:

 

"Where are my roses?";
and I will gladly say:
Here are your roses,
b
e
a
u
t
i
f
u
l
one!

  

Here are your roses 

~ Critiques/Comments ~    

 

Valerie Jochum

vjochum@hotmail.com

Ugonna, you have such a unique way of writing.  Your expression will lead anyone who reads it to believe, it was written just for them.  So lovely! 

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Renee' Quinn

qrenee@att.net

such wonderfully colorful words....  my favorite line would have to be...  clouds of my being.....  that is a fantastic line.....  

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Farah D

farah@overseas.co.uk

I had to read this after your comments re- my poem and the link you left! and I am stunned! this poem is the "other side" of mine! beautifully and expressively written!! Thank you so much for the link you left! or I might have never discovered this wonderful piece of writing! 

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Teresa jacobs

truffels_37211@yahoo.com

I love the line, "On moonlit roads to home and yesterday, you walk to the beat of my heart", ahhh, so romantic. Once again you have managed to gather my feelings and captivate them with your wonderful style of writing. I am so intriuged by your words and savor eveything about them. The stories they reveal give meaning to life and the essence of your soul. Thank you for sharing. 

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Deborah Russell

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There is great human compassion expressed here. Anyone could be "beautiful one" and that leaves me to visualize this window to world of love in purist concept. Great writing. 

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Myra Lochner

myrataal@mweb.co.za

Ugonna, Giver of Roses ...  Here is a rose for you too:  HAIKU  fragrance of the soul painted in purple and pink stemmed on Life's green  Myra Sun  

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Rosemary Basil

rose@rosemarybasil.com

Ugonna, your poems are pure light words dancing in a dark world. Thank you for sharing and for signing at my site!  

Rose

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2002-03-06 21:13:59

 

Misty Lackey

countrygal_cc@yahoo.com

here are your roses beautiful one, what more would any woman want to hear but these words from a guy. wow, you sure have words to melt a heart and send it into passion.

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2002-04-23 16:29:48

 

mona

moca124@hotmail.com

dear uggona  

beautiful words as always 

2002-05-11 07:47:16

 

Judy Costea

snowmansmom@hotmail.com

 

Ugonna, 

 

You make the reader feel as though they are the one in the poem. I love the way you bring my heart and mind into your poetry, as though i could be on this path and journey enjoying life and love with you. You have such a beautiful way of expressing all that is around you and making me see it all so colorful and close to the heart. 

You are truly a man of many talents. 

Thank you for giving your beautiful gift of poetry to us all.   

 

Judy

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2003-01-24 09:59:41

 

Lesa Gay

lesajg@aol.com 

 

Thank you for the roses Ugonna! 

 

As many that have already commentd on this, I too agree that your work always draws me

into it as if you were writing directly to my soul. It is always such a pleasure to visit your site.

I am sorry the hour is so late or I would stay longer. 

 

I will be back soon to read more of the person that is you. 

 

My love, 

Lesa

http://PostPoems.com/members/lesajg

2003-02-04 03:33:22 

 

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