love

A Portrait

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I always dream of you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

there are a lot of allusions/illusions in this, images that stand for specific parts of our relationship.

"knights spent" = the first night we were together, we watched A Knight's Tale

Bug = he is known for his bright yellow 1970 volkswagen beetle

"you asked me to be yours" = his exact words were "I want you to be mine"

notes/letters = I get broed easily and constantly write him pointless half-page notes or long letters covering several pages

ten o'clock in the morning = duh, he's a guy, a young guy at that, so it is very rare that he is awake before 10 a.m.

Disney songs = especially when the stereo doesn't work, one of our favorite things to do is to sing out loud random Disney songs

convenient convenient store = that's something my Dad started as a family joke, and josh, bless his gorgeous heart, picked right up on it, along with every other family joke we have.

the last line is an allusion in itself, because this poem was actually written in response to a text message I got saying "sleep well and dream of me"
and I had to find a way to tell him that I always am dreaming of him.

and voila
the first really decent love poem I think i've ever written

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