7-25-09 this is a metaphorical poem with a message that i'm not completely on board with. it was the first poem i ever wrote about a subject most people are either sheeps too or shepards of or the hungry wolves or the grass the sheep eat. it's rediculous. cuz people spend so much time arguing the bible and jesus and all that shit when they're bible quoting asses can't ever get the point right. God built man to love and worship Him. man was being a total dueche and fucking up. he needed a way to communicate because if a leader could just get a word in edgewise in a screaming panicy mob of non-listeners maybe He could remind man why He made us (that by the way is the only reason he sent jesus... not all the other bullshit bible thumpers will spit at you.) god wanted to talk to his kids. and we were too busy running ourselves over and fucking up that we couldn't listen to reason. hell we were making such a racket we couldn't even hear at all. so he had to send a leader who could convince the herd of clammering idiots that if we move together in love instead of "every man for himself" then we're more likely to succeed. (btw until we do, we'll continue to fail) the crammed in together shoulder to shoulder... yet touching no one... parts came cuz of the first few minutes of the movie crash. "we're all in such desire need to contact and connection that we all just crash into each other to feel anything at all" that shit fucked me up and i wrote this. so it's a message. maybe not one i totally believe. but it's one that the masses believe and sometimes you gotta suck it up and either flow or at least not go against the herd or else you'll get trampled. lol. it was my first attempt at metaphoring earth, god and man while using common man's beliefs and ideas instead of my own.
if you don't like it or understand it at all. that's ok. cuz most people don't. i've grown since then though so give me a chance. lol.
laters
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