Suggestions for improvement definately needed . . .
Reading "Battle" and "My Personal Demon" might help this make sense . . . then again, it might not.
Personally, I think this poem turned out more like a song, but there's no way I could ever get a tune right for it. Read "Diseased" and "Battle", and it might make more sense
Believe me, this hurt me in so many ways...he might as well have been having sex with someone else.
cause everything fell into place
