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patriciajj commented on: Liquid Heart by patriciajj 1 year 4 weeks ago
Having you in the front row: Having you in the front row seat of my presentations makes all the difference. Thank you for your kind and eloquent motivation. The privilege is mine!   
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patriciajj commented on: Liquid Heart by patriciajj 1 year 4 weeks ago
Now that's poetry! I was: Now that's poetry! I was stunned, humbled and delighted as you graced me with both encouragement and splendor. An enormous thank you, highly valued Poet!!!  
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patriciajj commented on: Hits different by SSmoothie 1 year 4 weeks ago
Each line gave off an: Each line gave off an electrifying spark of recognition as I saw myself in your journey. And isn't that what the best poetry does? Under the dazzle (And you've got it, my friend!), we make a connection that reaches deep, rattles us, even changes us.   With your own lithe, glistening and contagiously emotive style, plus a brilliant handling of dichotomy, you invited me to explore my own feelings about change.   How quotable and on target is your conclusion that, for all my own aching and moaning about change, perhaps it's not a cruel, cosmic joke after all; perhaps it's not even good or bad:    "It  just     hits  different."   A thought-provoking success. Loving it! Be well.  
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patriciajj commented on: A modest nod by humanfruit 1 year 4 weeks ago
I thoroughly enjoyed this: I thoroughly enjoyed this dizzyingly brilliant and serene introspection. I was absolutely entranced by the metaphorical enchantment of a dew-laden web turning to ice crystals (the passage of time) which are embraced as "dreamcatchers" for life's inner nightmares.   A stunning exercise for my imagination. And, believe me, the payoff was huge! Amazing.   
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S74rw4rd commented on: choose or others do by humanfruit 1 year 4 weeks ago
I hope your artistry is never: I hope your artistry is never unnoticed.
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Pungus commented on: Hits different by SSmoothie 1 year 4 weeks ago
THIS hits different: holds a lifetime worth of story that diminishes any such romance to bland sorrow. and the pop-culture reference makes a great frame for the big picture of your clever camera!
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SSmoothie commented on: A modest nod by humanfruit 1 year 4 weeks ago
I've read it thrice and: I've read it thrice and probably a few.more.times after posting this and still.concocting meanings bit they all boil down to the blushing cheeks to.which I will call a romantic line, I looked for monsters and peep holes but could find it to make sense so I just kept enjoying the maze over and over again with all its secret passages and dead ends. Thank you sir, a nod to you. A great way to pass some time reading your head but only ending up reading mine. Well played... well played! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Never forget you by SSmoothie 1 year 4 weeks ago
Thank you deeply wordman.: Thank you deeply wordman. Have a creative year ! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Liquid Heart by patriciajj 1 year 4 weeks ago
How beautifully pondered is: How beautifully pondered is the faith that the wheels will still go round in what ever fashion, beautifully rendered a painting as magnificent as its frame guided and intricately carved catching the eye to signal what glory lies within and you did not disappoint! The stokes perfectly weighted the dark dancing with the light, the colours harmonising and clashing where they should placing drama unfolding into a renewal of at the very least high hopes drawing you into other dimensions of thought, experience and imagination with keys to emotions clicking open the locks at every line's end and yet still more is fathomed from the whole as much as the universe in each part. Beautifully and masterfully done, the fire to my smoke, water to my vapour, rich earth to my dust. Hugss Ss 
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Pungus commented on: choose or others do by humanfruit 1 year 4 weeks ago
Thank you quite: And I love how keenly you were able to pinpoint literally my intentions; certainly made me feel good and proud and I'm glad it didn't go unnoticed at 4 o'clock in the morning
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S74rw4rd commented on: choose or others do by humanfruit 1 year 4 weeks ago
I like that third line's: I like that third line's double allusion to T. S. Eliot's poems, The Love Song Of J. Alfred Prufrock and The Hollow Men.
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beaconzbard commented on: IT WAS JUST AN ORDINARY NAIL by beaconzbard 1 year 4 weeks ago
It's on YouTube: I read this one on YouTube:  https://youtube.com/shorts/eFcUD7Q0aso
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Pungus commented on: GREATLY EXAGGERATED by georgeschaefer 1 year 4 weeks ago
your style is timeless: IS THAT A NEW FOLDER I SEE?! GIGGLY
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beaconzbard commented on: BOARDED UP WINDOWS by beaconzbard 1 year 5 weeks ago
I read it: You can watch/hear me read it at https://youtube.com/shorts/X1OihkcsH4Y
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grimfate commented on: Stranger Still by grimfate 1 year 5 weeks ago
Each to their own path: That is pretty much all I have left to feel for the world these days, pity and shame.
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