Full of imagery and lines to love!: Beautiful and wise, enriching. My favorite lines: "an idea far-flung/gets into your/morality"
Instantly a favorite of this reader, on the whole. : )
Thank you for your deeply: Thank you for your deeply moving and beautifully expressed encouragement. It's perfect and there's no need to say more. Always an honor.
Smoldering grandeur. The: Smoldering grandeur. The erotic tension builds into a stunning crescendo of playful, surprising poetics. My favorites:
"An easy slide into your atmosphere"
Blissful motion. Gorgeous!
"Two supernovas swirling around eachother
Dancing around who makes the first touch"
Oh, I get that!
"A magnetising exchange of life force"
Whoa! Nailed it with ethereal splendor.
"A higher plane of conciousness
A closeness closer than close"
Diving deep into some metaphysical currents. Cosmic. In the best way!
"A universe of pleasure has opened up
The sparks fly lighting up oblivion
Creation has spoken its truth
Love has had its way
showering sweet pulses over plums and rosebuds
Endless yet finite"
Ok, I love it all! I just realized that I really can't choose my favorite lines because it's all one extended explosion of passion and inner exploration.
A sublime celebration. Congratulations on this!
The verbal beauty of this: The verbal beauty of this poem cannot be overstated. It resonates off the screen---so much significance compressed into so few lines. This is one of the best poems I have read in a long, long time.
My family always been:
My family always been worriers, Dad was always Air force, I'm Army.
Uncle was Navy. My cousin was Marine, the only difference between Chief
Security Officer is we are taught how to kill and how to die. I'm 62 years old
and slow now. It taught me to work in a trade on the side so we can get a job when our time is up! Everybody did something now, I write poetry with advertising copyright like Eating at Jim's.
PFC. Roney
Chief Security Officer
Solo Surveillance
William J. Roney III
871st Eng, Bat.
Yes it does, and I have: Yes it does, and I have found---when I am being brutally candid with myself---that those two periods produce insights that I might not have acquired any other way. When I was young, and when I was experiencing them first-hand, they did not seem like insights; just more terrors. But now, with a perspective of over forty years, I can place them in a more overall context.
Thank you! The realization: Thank you! The realization that God will use me and my work however He sees fit has been a wonderful comfort to me lately. I will never get to see the fullness of His purpose, but He is faithful to not waste a single moment of our lives when we are submitted to his will.
Im about to comment... but: Im about to comment... but first I will read the lustrous thoughts in blue so see what else I can find in this glorious poem with so much infused. I am struck for the right words and I dont have enough time but I will come back here and place what is mine
The gratefulness of being able to read such deeply rich and indelible works by your remarkable hand so graciously led by your head, heart and mind
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