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lyrycsyntyme commented on: to come to know another (a breakaway discovered among groups of birds) by tula 1 year 40 weeks ago
Full of imagery and lines to love!: Beautiful and wise, enriching. My favorite lines: "an idea far-flung/gets into your/morality"     Instantly a favorite of this reader, on the whole. : )
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: more than counting sheep by redbrick 1 year 40 weeks ago
Mhm.   "Round like a circle: Mhm.   "Round like a circle in a spiral, like a wheel within a wheel Never ending or beginning on an ever spinning reel"
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tallsquirrelgirl commented on: MEANT TO BE by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 40 weeks ago
yes! hi again : yes! hi again, glad to see you're still here too!
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life_used_to_be... commented on: MEANT TO BE by tallsquirrelgirl 1 year 40 weeks ago
Hey! Do you remember me? We: Hey! Do you remember me? We talked on here years ago. I came across your page again. Im glad to see you are still writing 
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life_used_to_be... commented on: Numb by Tortured_Poet 1 year 40 weeks ago
this poem really hit home for: this poem really hit home for me. I went through a breakup with my ex girlfriend and I had a rough time. 
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patriciajj commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you for your deeply: Thank you for your deeply moving and beautifully expressed encouragement. It's perfect and there's no need to say more. Always an honor.  
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patriciajj commented on: Desired by SSmoothie 1 year 40 weeks ago
Smoldering grandeur. The: Smoldering grandeur. The erotic tension builds into a stunning crescendo of playful, surprising poetics. My favorites:   "An easy slide into your atmosphere" Blissful motion. Gorgeous!    "Two supernovas swirling around eachother Dancing around who makes the first touch" Oh, I get that!   "A magnetising exchange of life force" Whoa! Nailed it with ethereal splendor.   "A higher plane of conciousness A closeness closer than close" Diving deep into some metaphysical currents. Cosmic. In the best way!     "A universe of pleasure has opened up The sparks fly lighting up oblivion Creation has spoken its truth Love has had its way showering sweet pulses over plums and rosebuds Endless yet finite"   Ok, I love it all! I just realized that I really can't choose my favorite lines because it's all one extended explosion of passion and inner exploration.   A sublime celebration. Congratulations on this!  
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Starward commented on: Sonic Dark by satishverma 1 year 40 weeks ago
The verbal beauty of this: The verbal beauty of this poem cannot be overstated.  It resonates off the screen---so much significance compressed into so few lines.  This is one of the best poems I have read in a long, long time.
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williamjroneyiii commented on: Busted Big Time by williamjroneyiii 1 year 40 weeks ago
My family always been:   My family always been worriers, Dad was always Air force, I'm Army. Uncle was Navy. My cousin was Marine, the only difference between Chief Security Officer is we are taught how to kill and how to die. I'm 62 years old  and slow now. It taught me to work in a trade on the side so we can get a job when our time is up! Everybody did something now, I write poetry with advertising copyright like Eating at Jim's. PFC. Roney Chief  Security Officer Solo Surveillance William J. Roney III   871st Eng, Bat.
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Starward commented on: absence by ewbonitz 1 year 40 weeks ago
Yes it does, and I have: Yes it does, and I have found---when I am being brutally candid with myself---that those two periods produce insights that I might not have acquired any other way.  When I was young, and when I was experiencing them first-hand, they did not seem like insights; just more terrors.  But now, with a perspective of over forty years, I can place them in a more overall context.  
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ewbonitz commented on: absence by ewbonitz 1 year 40 weeks ago
You know, I've had time to: You know, I've had time to process, writing helps a lot, and I know that this will all turn out for my good in the end.
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Starward commented on: sequoia by ewbonitz 1 year 40 weeks ago
I applaud your theology!: I applaud your theology!
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ewbonitz commented on: sequoia by ewbonitz 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thank you! The realization: Thank you! The realization that God will use me and my work however He sees fit has been a wonderful comfort to me lately. I will never get to see the fullness of His purpose, but He is faithful to not waste a single moment of our lives when we are submitted to his will. 
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crypticbard commented on: more than counting sheep by redbrick 1 year 40 weeks ago
Thanks John, yes, that does: Thanks John, yes, that does come to mind, also including thre windmills of one's mind and those Quixotic giants too.
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SSmoothie commented on: Unforgiven Rapture by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
Im about to comment... but: Im about to comment... but first I will read the lustrous thoughts in blue so see what else I can find in this glorious poem with so much infused. I am struck for the right words and I dont have enough time but I will come back here and place what is mine  The gratefulness of being able to read such deeply rich and indelible works by your remarkable hand so graciously led by your head, heart and mind 
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