Owner of my Prison

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Digging my way Out

Why am I having so much doubt?

I go to pick up a pen and then chicken out.

Spark of inspiration but then it fades away.

I have the words then suddenly forget what to say. 

Itching to get these thoughts and feelings out.

Yearning to scream, wanting to shout.

Pulling and yanking at the chains I'm in.

Knowing I'm the creator of my own prison.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is a first write in a very long time, this is my freestyle stuff to get back into writing again 

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Teytonon's picture

Who are you?

O

P.O.

U P.O.?

U R P.O.?

URE P.O.?

URE POE?

U RED POE?

URE D POET?

R U RED, POET?

RT! URE D POET!

O RT! URE D POET!

TORTURED_POET

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Oh the torture of the poet,

Oh the torture of the poet, it has to be beautiful, but it doesn't, it has to be masterful, but it doesn't. it has to rhyme but it doesn't have to or it does and off with the rolling clouds goes that perfect line, while debating never to be seen again to perhaps some other poet who did not judge it and just let it ride... yesI get cha. Nice free write flows great! Nice one!  


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Teytonon's picture

On writing

This is very good, especially from someone who hasn't written anything in a while. Writing can be tough. As the old sportswriter Red Smith used to say 

'All you have to do is sit down at a typewriter, cut open a vein, and bleed'.

Keep on bleeding!