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redbrick commented on: Shelf of Books by djtj 23 weeks 6 days ago
'Just books!' now there is a: 'Just books!' now there is a novel idea these days! We still have to reclaim the nomenclature- they're basically sold as multipurpose 'storage units' for years now... and advertised as useful as bookshelves optionally.
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redbrick commented on: Dear Tommy by Pungus 24 weeks 9 hours ago
Dear Topsyturnsylad, the: Dear Topsyturnsylad, the moon’s still lounging in its bus‑seat dreams while Cthulhu hums Bob Marley to a row of flamingos crunching popcorn like it’s the end of the world and the start of the circus. The court’s handed me a fistful of stardust as penance, Godzilla’s tapping his foot for that long‑overdue mixtape, and somewhere between puff and poof I’ve slipped behind the vending machine, grinning in the shoelace‑shadows. The birds are still shrieking, the planet’s still a poisonous turtle, and yet here we are, two cosmic mischief‑makers swapping postcards from the edge of the dream.   The moon leans back in its bus‑seat throne, eyes half‑closed, humming a reggae lullaby while Cthulhu, all tentacles and tenderness, feeds popcorn to flamingos in the front row.   The court’s verdict is a jar of stardust, spilling through my fingers as Godzilla waits, tail swaying to a beat only he can hear, still wanting that mixtape you swore you’d send.   I haven’t vanished — not really. I’m just folded into the vending‑machine shadows, shoelaces tangled in the pulse of the night, watching the poisonous turtle planet spin and thinking how lucky it is to have another dreamer out here on the edge.    
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Bellalibra commented on: As I ask… by orishaman 24 weeks 19 hours ago
Balance : A most poignant writing encompassing reciprocal love.  No ego. No judgement. Simple understanding of the hearts' needs.  l
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redbrick commented on: poems for money and no kicks for free... by redbrick 24 weeks 20 hours ago
Glad to bring some sunshine: Glad to bring some sunshine Tony!
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Teytonon commented on: poems for money and no kicks for free... by redbrick 24 weeks 1 day ago
This is outstanding!..: This is outstanding! I loved it! 
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StarSpared commented on: Redemptive Suffering by Stephen 24 weeks 1 day ago
This poem has helped me more: This poem has helped me more that you might suspect!
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StarSpared commented on: + 9TH POEMS: Aubade, Spiritually Composed by S74rw4rd-13d 24 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you for the high: Thank you for the high encouragement and validation in this comment!
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redbrick commented on: + 9TH POEMS: Aubade, Spiritually Composed by S74rw4rd-13d 24 weeks 1 day ago
Far too many of us are: Far too many of us are focused on Moses' burning bush moment that it's too easy to overlook that we all have our individual and unique barefoot day before the LORD. This poem shows me that that all is not lost.
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StarSpared commented on: Redemptive Suffering by Stephen 24 weeks 1 day ago
Wow!  Thanks for the mention,: Wow!  Thanks for the mention, and I like the poem.
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LittleLennonGurl commented on: The Time To Free Ourselves Is Now by LittleLennonGurl 24 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you!!: Thank you!! 
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Stephen commented on: Redemptive Suffering by Stephen 24 weeks 1 day ago
An addendum: An addendum to StarSpared's + 9TH POEMS: When Ma B-s---r Prayed Her Rosar.  Ironically, my mother was known to friends as "Mrs. B". I wrote this poem about her some time ago
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redbrick commented on: Meuse in Oktober by redbrick 24 weeks 1 day ago
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redbrick commented on: foment in the firmament by redbrick 24 weeks 1 day ago
Thank you dear StarSpared.: Thank you dear StarSpared. Your words are both kind and hunbling.
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StarSpared commented on: foment in the firmament by redbrick 24 weeks 1 day ago
Your command of powerfully: Your command of powerfully poetic language never fails to amaze me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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redbrick commented on: the cleaver of Devil's Kitchen by redbrick 24 weeks 1 day ago
Love how you’ve caught the: Love how you’ve caught the rhythm of it; that guzzle of gravity pulling and tossing the lines like a storm‑drunk tide. The whole piece does feel like it’s heaving against the shore, doesn’t it? Glad the ocean rhymes found their way to you. And that this experience has got back to me; so valuable and appreciated.
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