A creature of fire and light
Wild with desire to spear his heart
The boy lay shaking beneath her binding
His eyes blinded by warm blood rising
A creature of cold and dark
Mad with desire to own her soul
The girl lay sliding beneath his grip
Skin slick with sweat from the thought of his slip
You brought myth and magic to
You brought myth and magic to life with pulsating vibrancy and gripping emotion. Well done, fine wordcrafter!