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redbrick commented on: drink the hemlock by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
I was hoping you would relish: I was hoping you would relish “la petite répartie.” 
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karlmcallister commented on: drink the hemlock by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Nice!: Touché mon amie! Well done!
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J-C4113d commented on: skylight morning by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Your verbal skill is well: Your verbal skill is well displayed in this powerful poem.
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J-C4113d commented on: drink the hemlock by redbrick 35 weeks 2 days ago
Your use of metaphor, simile,: Your use of metaphor, simile, and symbolism is always dynamically effective!  Always!
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karlmcallister commented on: the phoenix by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!: Thanks redbrick!
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karlmcallister commented on: drink the hemlock by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!:
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karlmcallister commented on: fusion by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!: Ha, ha ... luminous!  Thanks!
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karlmcallister commented on: fusion by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!: Thanks!
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karlmcallister commented on: all heart by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!: I guess we both have a thing for the sea. :)
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karlmcallister commented on: fusion by karlmcallister 35 weeks 2 days ago
Thanks!:
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patriciajj commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 35 weeks 3 days ago
I’m thrilled and gratified by: I’m thrilled and gratified by your astute analysis of my expression. You eloquently, precisely, unearthed my intention. Coming from such a gifted wordcrafter, that means so much. Huge thanks! 
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patriciajj commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 35 weeks 3 days ago
I’m honored by your stunning: I’m honored by your stunning and inspiring footprints. I also enjoyed my visit to your site and the discovery of your amazing literary artistry. Thank you so much for your valuable encouragement.
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patriciajj commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 35 weeks 3 days ago
Many thanks for taking the: Many thanks for taking the time to read, with deep understanding, and comment on my work. Your observations illuminated my vision with clarity and beauty. That means so much! 
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patriciajj commented on: Lessons from the Sea by patriciajj 35 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you, fine poet, for: Thank you, fine poet, for your empathetic and brilliant analysis. You made my day! 
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patriciajj commented on: i was homeless once by redbrick 35 weeks 3 days ago
First,  I commend you for: First,  I commend you for exposing the brutal reality of a humanitarian crisis that should be completely unacceptable in any society that calls itself enlightened, particularly any first world country with resources, but not the political will, to end it in a compassionate way.    In my view, such hyper-individualism is a form of tyranny, so this cause has been dear to my heart for many years.    With piercing and unsparing poetic sleight of hand, you utilized your skill for setting a gripping stage to show contrast as well as parallels between physical and emotional need, with the emotional being as, if not more, excruciating to the inner self, the true self.    “Marble floors echo louder than alleys” Absolutely.    Congratulations on this example of superior talent used in the service of vital issues. Great respect!   
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