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redbrick commented on: in the waning light by redbrick 41 weeks 3 hours ago
The Hope: Blessed be the day when the root grows downward and the fruit reaches upward. Blessed be the moment when the dry branch blossoms. Blessed be the silence that becomes song. Blessed be the ashes that become life.
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redbrick commented on: consolation in the kitchen by redbrick 41 weeks 3 hours ago
Thank you so much. : Thank you so much. 
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orangejumpsuit commented on: Tropical medicine by orangejumpsuit 41 weeks 3 hours ago
Thanks, i just fart it out: Thanks, i just fart it out
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Pursia commented on: Tropical medicine by orangejumpsuit 41 weeks 22 hours ago
"necrotic tendrils like black: "necrotic tendrils like black starfish" simply must applaud
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ramonathompsont commented on: CHILDREN OF THE STARS by joy 41 weeks 1 day ago
well written! a beauty of a: well written! a beauty of a piece!
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: consolation in the kitchen by redbrick 41 weeks 1 day ago
You describe, very well!!!,: You describe, very well!!!, one of the universal issues that comes with being human.
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S74rw4rd-13d commented on: in the waning light by redbrick 41 weeks 1 day ago
This poem is excellent (as: This poem is excellent (as yours always are), and that final stanza is a real powerhouse.  It reminded me of the dry bones' song in T. S. Eliot's poem, Ash Wednesday.  And any poem that can remind me of his great achievement is a wonderful poem, indeed.
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redbrick commented on: unfinished in udder confusion by redbrick 41 weeks 1 day ago
Many thanks, Jordan! So much: Many thanks, Jordan! So much brokenness around us and in our lives it could be presumed as well. Most appreciated 
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Savvart commented on: The Brave Art of Love by Savvart 41 weeks 3 days ago
Thank you for your wonderful: Thank you for your wonderful comment and expression of the quality of my poem. It is so deeply appreciated :)
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J-C4113d commented on: Protest Ice? by ramonathompsont 41 weeks 3 days ago
That final line must have, in: That final line must have, in some form, heard by Bolshevik Lenin when he ordered the execution of Russia's royal family; and by the Bavarian housepainter when he was appointed chancellor of Germany in January, 1933.
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: unfinished in udder confusion by redbrick 41 weeks 4 days ago
Very creative : Such a great metaphor of imagery and sacrifice. Plant orange cones and watering them with IOUs sounds like broken promises. 
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elliot_jordan2003 commented on: “Hardest Thing I Ever Had to Do” by elliot_jordan2003 41 weeks 4 days ago
Wow: Wow Redbrick thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. A relationship is fun bu the break up is definitely hard especially when those memories fade. 
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redbrick commented on: “Hardest Thing I Ever Had to Do” by elliot_jordan2003 41 weeks 5 days ago
Your song-like poem captures: Your song-like poem captures heartbreak in such a raw, straightforward way.  The struggle to “turn off” love feels so real here. I especially felt the line about the hardest part being “the time you spent to miss,” because it shows how love lingers in memory even when the relationship is gone.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Goodbye Ace Frehley by randyjohnson 41 weeks 6 days ago
Amen! : Amen! 
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patriciajj commented on: What Survives by patriciajj 41 weeks 6 days ago
I’m overjoyed that you found: I’m overjoyed that you found some comfort in my expression and that you, so generously, took the time to dive deep with exquisite and precise insights. Coming from you that’s a coveted gift.    I’m still praying for your wellbeing and wishing you the very best of everything. You are a beacon. 
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