clod-flair

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O Error 500, thou art the curtain drop

before the play begins.

The audience refreshes, refreshes—

yet the stage remains blank.

 

Cloudflare, dressed in clod-flair,

waves its arms with borrowed bravado,

a gatekeeper who forgets the keys,

a sentinel who snoozes at the door.

 

The request remains,

thus, silence restrains,

yet the page refuses to speak—

and we, poor players,

wait for the server’s next breath.

 
 
 
 
 
 
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Jesster's picture

this speaks to me

there are many levels this piece hits me. 


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For me it was birthed out of

For me it was birthed out of pure frustratoon through the many levels of the digital forest Smile


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Jesster's picture

yup

it reminded me of times logging into postpoems and the screen pulling up an error message


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Jesster's picture

yup

it reminded me of times logging into postpoems and the screen pulling up an error message


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