The simplicity of what:
The simplicity of what surrounds our lives every day is a pleasure to read, when painted with words by a true artist.
Thank you for this, it's beautiful.
"Can yours ever be the same: "Can yours ever be the same where you are?" I have never been able to put this haunting sentiment into words. how you made grief sound so beautiful!
Through the metaphor you have: Through the metaphor you have deployed, you compress a profound meaning, and an implied backstory, into such a small space---always a sign of classic talent.
Thanks to Starward, I found: Thanks to Starward, I found your endearingly relatable and inviting poem. The charming metaphor is perfectly tailored to the experience and the delightful style. A joy to read.