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Wordman commented on: In the Mirror by Wordman 2 years 51 weeks ago
A most gracious critique, I'm: A most gracious critique, I'm glad you enjoyed this, thank you for the visit and the kind words. 
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patriciajj commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 2 years 51 weeks ago
Coming from a poet who can: Coming from a poet who can spin some amazing creations, that means so much. I'm honored that you took the time to read my work and leave such encouraging feedback. Thank you so much!   
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patriciajj commented on: In the Mirror by Wordman 2 years 51 weeks ago
"where darkness haunts: "where darkness haunts itself grieving the smallest taste of light"   How strikingly you captured the most challenging part of the human adventure. Each relatable line thunders with a captivating eloquence that reinforces the realism; every line is power-packed, chilling, resonate and impressive.   I love how the tone shifts gently in the last lines into the realm of hope and rests, profoundly, on your memorable conclusion. And the title is a clever, perfect fit. Bravo!!!  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: I'm thinking by Wolfy 2 years 51 weeks ago
I like it: Still, stagnation and complacence as a vampire ever chasing us, hoping for weariness to win out. We must always chase the sun, huh? : )
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: After So Many Years by KingofWords 2 years 51 weeks ago
I love the simile connecting: I love the simile connecting love as a cosmic return.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: LIGHT GOING OUT by georgeschaefer 2 years 51 weeks ago
A sight I've known, much as: A sight I've known, much as you've written it.
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Wordman commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 2 years 51 weeks ago
A great write, as all are,: A great write, as all are, thought provoking, and a valuable lesson in the phrasing of words.  Thanks for sharing with us. 
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patriciajj commented on: Transcendence of Fury by patriciajj 2 years 51 weeks ago
Your surprisingly deep and: Your surprisingly deep and insightful studies never fail to humble and amaze me.   Everything I was hoping to convey, as well as my intention, was astutely understood and reflected upon. I can't tell you how fulfilling that is, but any poet honored enough to receive a review by you, certainly understands. I'm unspeakably grateful that you took the time to deconstruct this highly personal poem and draw such expansive conclusions. This reassures me that my goal to provide a moment of respite from the suffocating toil of existence to readers (even if it's just one) has been achieved. I feel like shouting "Score!" Thank you a thousand times for this.   I loved your metaphor "spiritual genetics". More fulfilment. More thanks.   "write captions for . . . " Smiling. Thanks again!    I have been, for quite sometime, nervous about crossing a mystical line in my poems for fear it might be misunderstood as arrogant (or worse) but you helped me find some courage as you rolled out an eloquent red carpet for me to continue. Your authentication means everything to me. Yet another round of thanks.   I'm privileged beyond words. Thank you for accompanying me, and other blessed poets, on our travels. You are an indispensable, highly valued and towering pillar of this community.  
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patriciajj commented on: The Splendor Of A Thousand Sparkling Stars---A Sonnet For Cascade by S74rw4rd-13d 2 years 51 weeks ago
Trust me, you blaze bright in: Trust me, you blaze bright in that constellation. And one is never verbose if their words are highly valued.  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Never Reported by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 51 weeks ago
Quite the timing, indeed: The strange and intricate pattern of things. That's real sad to hear.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Lost Souls by Chandapanda420 2 years 51 weeks ago
Life has a way of setting us: Life has a way of setting us into phases that feel unending. Our books, though, are many chapters, though I know it's hard to always feel or believe that from inside the story. It seems to me that you write with your heart on your sleeve, and with clarity. Those are two good paddles to have as help to get through rough waters in this part of the story. All the best to you.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Revelations by jaela 2 years 51 weeks ago
Beautifully ambient with: Beautifully ambient with nostalgia, longing, and lost love.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Things Slip Away by Silver__lining 2 years 51 weeks ago
Very lyrical, with rhymes: Very lyrical, with rhymes that work without feeling forced. Strong flow from end to end, and i can't help but agree, "the saddest truth in life is things slip away." Life is beautiful, but is reasonably the heaviest price we pay for such beauty.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Monotone musings by jaela 2 years 51 weeks ago
"Raindrops fall at the quiet: "Raindrops fall at the quiet speed of contentment" is a fascinating line to unfurl.
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crypticbard commented on: Never Reported by lyrycsyntyme 2 years 51 weeks ago
How timely that at this: How timely that at this period of new month beginning we are grieving and reeling at the loss of lives in the still fresh railway tragedy in the modern city of the Thessalonians, Greece.
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