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SSmoothie commented on: There's always a but by SSmoothie 3 years 33 weeks ago
Ah yes true, ne'er truer word: Ah yes true, ne'er truer word spoken peoples are complex and complicated, sometimes diametrically opposed  other times aligned and resonant. Thanks for your care and commentary cheers ss.
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SSmoothie commented on: the color of water vapor by 9inety 3 years 33 weeks ago
This is just gorgeous! I wish: This is just gorgeous! I wish I wrote it! Beautiful my firenf just beautiful! Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Border Moon by 9inety 3 years 33 weeks ago
Great use of repetition! I: Great use of repetition! I miss you where are you?
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SSmoothie commented on: I REMEMBER by heatherburns35 3 years 33 weeks ago
Lovely and sad. Poignant!: Lovely and sad. Poignant! Lovely imagery with a punctuating sadness relieved by the warth of memories. Lovely write! Cheers ss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Perfection Sacificed by a_whisper_away 3 years 33 weeks ago
Yes it is very much beyond: Yes it is very much beyond us, it may always be. Same as perfection. Beautifully and rather well said! Cheers Ss 
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SSmoothie commented on: Timeless by prodigal_prince 3 years 33 weeks ago
Such a hauntingly rueful and: Such a hauntingly rueful and searching poem, I like the time analogy and how it wraps up in the end,  With more than one meaning  Ie out of time  Or  A timeless couple  Or  A timeless story  Or  A timeless pain that lives again and again    Thanks for sharing some beautifu and soulful l imagery. Cheerss 
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Starward commented on: And I miss you by SSmoothie 3 years 33 weeks ago
Revisitng this great poem, I: Revisitng this great poem, I am very disappointed in, and embarrassed by, the comment I posted last October.  Yes, the other two poems have written better comments than mine, but what I failed to say is how much I admire how the presence of the missed person is both evokved and summoned by the various natural and local phenomena the Poet names.  Part of a Poet's role is to name things:  in that respect, Poetry began in Eden.  By namin all the things that evoke the presence you miss, and bow they evoke it, you show us not only how to find the same comfort, but you also bear witness to the hope of Heaven, where wehere pain is forgotten and forgiveness is remembered.  Wow!  I don't think professional theologians could put it more poignantly.
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SSmoothie commented on: Fractal Lives by Beavis 3 years 33 weeks ago
Its so nice to look at things: Its so nice to look at things in a similar way a meeting of minds and windows of souls, cutnfirmnthe same cloth the views may be different but the details are interpreted similarly, not too much that nothing need be said and just enough commonality to not grow tiresome the phrase "you are my person" come to mind. What a lovely invitation! Shame its only for the one! Nicer than nice write! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Unannounced by INKSTAIN 3 years 33 weeks ago
This is gorgeous! So sorry I: This is gorgeous! So sorry I never saw this before. Magnificent! Where are you? We need more if this! 
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SSmoothie commented on: And I miss you by SSmoothie 3 years 33 weeks ago
Thankyou so much. I still: Thankyou so much. I still miss her deeply. Hugss 
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SSmoothie commented on: the way you tell by Spinoza 3 years 33 weeks ago
Softly, softly catchy: Softly, softly catchy monkey... I felt hypnotised by the firelight, eyes heavy and feeling happy, warm and content,  nice write! 
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SSmoothie commented on: My Beautiful Despot by Spinoza 3 years 33 weeks ago
8ts just that easy to sink: 8ts just that easy to sink with that heavy metal vibe you are what you attract as they say. Well verbalised here. Nice one 
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SSmoothie commented on: Promise Of The Dawn by GailHudson 3 years 33 weeks ago
Wonderful uplifting piece. I: Wonderful uplifting piece. I can feel the enthusiasm and positivity lepaing off the page! Well done, I needed to hear this today, Thankyou! 
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SSmoothie commented on: Forgiveness by LornaRJ 3 years 33 weeks ago
Beautiful! I felt filled with: Beautiful! I felt filled with the Holy Spirit when. I read this. Beautifully rendered etherial yet completely believable and reachable. Well done! 
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SSmoothie commented on: our p.o.t.e.ntial by insightspinner 3 years 33 weeks ago
Epic! Well constructed: Epic! Well constructed elequent and resounding. Thank you for sharing.
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