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I may be crazy
But I'm kind
I may be aloof
but I have a great mind
I may be distant
But my thoughts are near you
I may be resistant
But I can soften too
I may be a whirlwind
But I'm the wind beneath your wings 

I may be broken
But my pieces are  beautiful things 
I may be lost
But I can always find you
I may be a nomad
But I'm home

when I'm with you.

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I may be crazy 

But I'm kind 

I may be aloof 

but I have a great mind 

I may be distant 

But my thoughts are near you 

I may be resistant 

But I can soften too

I may be a whirlwind 

But ill always lift you up

I may be broken 

But my pieces are  beautiful 

I may be lost 

But I can always find you 

I may be a nomad 

But I'm home when I'm with you.

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last updated 27 March 2023 - 11:51am
©27 March 2023 - 10:16am — SSmoothie
27 March 2023 - 12:16pm — redbrick
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And what it boils down to is

And what it boils down to is this this wonderfully complex gathering of many things in the one person!

here is poetry that doesn't always conform

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29 March 2023 - 3:07pm — SSmoothie
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Ah yes true, ne'er truer word

Ah yes true, ne'er truer word spoken peoples are complex and complicated, sometimes diametrically opposed  other times aligned and resonant. Thanks for your care and commentary cheers ss.

Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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