Border Moon

See the children cry torn from their mother's breast

They should have known they were just like all the rest

That Orange moon has left us within deception at its culmination

This could have been that place of hope, a peaceful destination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

We all came from somewhere oppressed and distressed

And we all will end up in the swirling wind a bit possessed

That Orange moon has left us deception at its culmination

This could have been that place of hope, a peaceful destination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

Now, the man say's he cares about our collective security

It has nothing to do with some kind need for racial purity

That Orange moon has left us within deception at it's culmination

This should have been that place of hope not the hate filled destination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

A loving destination

A hopeful culmination

See the babies try to hold onto that ledge from which they are shoved

Into the hearts and minds of all humanity they need to be loved

That orange Moon has left us within deception at it's culmination

This should have been that place of hope not the hate filled destination

A loving destination A hopeful culmination A loving destination A hopeful culmination A loving destination A hopeful culmination A loving destination A hopeful culmination  

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It is hard sometimes life ...

Peace

Dylan 

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GabulousGabby's picture

I just felt like I'd come

I just felt like I'd come home when I

Read this.  It's exactly the sort of poetry that speaks to my soul. 

Gabby 

SSmoothie's picture

Come back soon dear poet I

Come back soon dear poet I miss you hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

Great use of repetition! I

Great use of repetition! I miss you where are you?


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

LeavingMyselfBehind's picture

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It feels rushed and frenzied, but I think it's supposed to. The repetition and lay out of the sentences really convey the stress and anxiety of the words. An interesting read for my first poem since I've been back.

allets's picture

Life Is Hard, Yes.

And then you write poetry to make it less difficult. R U OK? Let us hear from you, because you know we worry. Hope all is well. - slc


 

 

allets's picture

"a bit possessed"

Defines all of us, I think. Great to read you again. - slc

Gone a year, hope all is well. ~S~ 


 

 

Morningglory's picture

So happy to see your still around

It has been so long since I have seen a post from you. I'm so happy to see some of your words, Dylan. 


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