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Starward commented on: Jenny The Ho by williamjroneyiii 1 year 44 weeks ago
When you set sight on a: When you set sight on a jingle to write like this one that calls Jenny a "ho." from whence comes the urge that kickstarts the surge that makes the words gather and go? Or is ir a Muse, shod in sensible shoes that brings your lines to gnition? Does the "quiet and calm"* provide a smooth balm that blossoms into fruition? [* from the title of Wallace Stevens' poem, "The House Was Quiet And The World Was Calm"]
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Why This Madness by satishverma 1 year 44 weeks ago
It seems that: Love is the ultimate paradox.
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Poem For Patriciajj by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks ago
It's no small thing to be a: It's no small thing to be a messenger, to be a willing a vessel of hope and restoration. Certainly you'll be rewarded, but for now, just know that you made all the difference. Every happiness, every blessing to you.   
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patriciajj commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; *The Word Of The Lord Is Right, And All His Works* by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks ago
The eloquence keeps coming .: The eloquence keeps coming . . .   You're most welcome.  
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patriciajj commented on: My life’s first breath by ewbonitz 1 year 44 weeks ago
The poetry came back with: The poetry came back with beauty and wonder! And congratulations to you for taking the path of courage, hope and renewal: for choosing life! You should be proud of yourself. I know the struggles, and you certainly are not alone.   Thank you for your warm and candid reply.  
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: THANKYOU DR. B by joy 1 year 44 weeks ago
Thank you, heart warming nostalgia: This is a beautiful, earthy tribute to both a person who touched your lives and our lasting human interconnectivity, when opened to it.
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ewbonitz commented on: My life’s first breath by ewbonitz 1 year 44 weeks ago
I appreciate all the kind: I appreciate all the kind words you've spoken. I haven't written poetry for nearly a decade, until recently, that is, I started writing again. My wife left me, and began an affair with two separate co-workers. Well... damn... in September I was planning on setting my affairs in order, writing a suicide note, and eating a bullet. I got help instead; had myself hospitalized, started seeing a therapist, started medication and resolved instead to live. And now, would you look at that, the poetry came back. Funny how it works that way...
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Starward commented on: THANKYOU DR. B by joy 1 year 44 weeks ago
The first two lines are very: The first two lines are very wise:  that moment, when winter gives way to spring, is one of the best moments of the year.
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DaztheDruid commented on: TRULY LAST CALL FOR THE SNAKE by DaztheDruid 1 year 44 weeks ago
Problem Lost the list need to: Problem Lost the list need to do another hence the delay
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DaztheDruid commented on: TRULY LAST CALL FOR THE SNAKE by DaztheDruid 1 year 44 weeks ago
IIJIJI: IIJIJI
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DaztheDruid commented on: TRULY LAST CALL FOR THE SNAKE by DaztheDruid 1 year 44 weeks ago
SNAKE I truly need to see the: SNAKE I truly need to see the cia first to calm them down two to tel them who's boss and three to get some ai free help on my job I'm not double dealing my reputation would be in tattersand I would loose support of the dark 4 days 3.15pm watch waitrose cameras Wiltshire there are 9 then call a cab. Where you want to meet won't work Oxfordshire please make a list we know u got 6 friends with piles
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Starward commented on: My Final Days by williamjroneyiii 1 year 44 weeks ago
Happy Birthday.: Happy Birthday.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; *The Word Of The Lord Is Right, And All His Works* by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks ago
Thank you for those words.  I: Thank you for those words.  I am always astounded that I can hold the words of the StarMaker in between my two clumsy hands.
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Starward commented on: Yet [*/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; *The Word Of The Lord Is Right, And All His Works* by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks ago
Yes, Sir, thank you for: Yes, Sir, thank you for pointing that out.  Your insights are always consistent---both responsive and expansive.
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Starward commented on: + 27.225 MHz: In Ephesus, An Early Christian Breathes A Sigh Of Relief by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks ago
Thank you, Sir.  The ruach: Thank you, Sir.  The ruach gives us the ability both physically and spiritually to aspire.
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