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crypticbard commented on: + 2ND POEMS: On Luke 18:13, Of The Tax Collector by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* A habitation not built by: A habitation not built by human hands but a tabernacle within the worshipful heart; there ever shall be no desolation. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Footnoting; Tanka On 2nd Peter 1:10 And 2nd Corinthians 12:9b** by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* What comfort in the: What comfort in the realisation that in all that has been meant to be detrimental God works out for good to those that love Him. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: THE THINGS CANCER CAN'T DO by joy 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Shining a bit of light into: Shining a bit of light into theirs makes such a brighter and happier time for all! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: I Saw These Signs, "Repent, Repent!" by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Please forgive my failure to: Please forgive my failure to reply timely when the original comment posted. I apologize for m carelessness. [ go to comment ]
Imprinted-soul commented on: A hand full of air by SSmoothie 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Beautiful : Beautiful piece. Sacred verbiage really struck something in me. I liked that. Thank you xo [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Footnote: Undisturbed Water by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Thank you very much. Far too: Thank you very much. Far too often, I find myself to be disturbed water, storm tossed water, and that's why I take great comfort in Christ's words in Apostle Mark's Gospel, "Peace, be still." [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Goliath's Contemplation Near Ephes Dammim, 2** by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* I had forgotten about Saul's: I had forgotten about Saul's stature, and I thank you for reminding me of that. And yes, he sent a militarily inexperienced adolescent to fight the battle, and I think Goliath and Saul were sharply surprised by the day's events. And you are right about the many Goliaths that surround us. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Pride by rachel 1 year 44 weeks* ago* There's so much depth in this: There's so much depth in this delicate, pocket-sized parable. It speaks of unshakable dignity, tenacity and the ability to see our worth even after being broken. In fact, you powerfully imply that the devastation created even more value. A highly evolved and inspiring analogy. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: a robot wrote this, it wasn't really me by Jesster 1 year 44 weeks* ago* This is amazing. And: This is amazing. And disconcerting. First, AI perfects art and now poetry? Actually, the small flaws, the quirks and surprises in human writing make it more enjoyable, so Tap has nothing on humans. It's impressive that you were able to pick up on clues that Tap wasn't all that he appeared to be. You outsmarted the smart poet. Fascinating post. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Marble by Tsenumaic 1 year 44 weeks* ago* There's an awe-inspiring: There's an awe-inspiring sense of triumph and ascension in this highly symbolic and intriguing work of art. I read it three times because I loved the poetic gymnastics and the surreal brilliance of it. Amazing! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Pride by rachel 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Short concise lines, and a: Short concise lines, and a compact length: and yet, you have summarized as profoundly as, say, Plato, the philosophy of resilience---of which many of us (and some of us who have been bullied for embracing our natures) have, or will acquire, a deep knowledge. This is a brave poem to post, and it will encourage others most certainly! [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Goliath's Contemplation Near Ephes Dammim, 2** by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* An interesting mediational: An interesting mediational note! In the panic and desperation Saul puts all upon the the little shepherd boy, Saul being a head taller than the Israelites. And David was more defender than offensive warrior. An apt image in the situation. And of Goliath's thoughts. Well, we live in a world of Goliaths, demi-Goliaths and wannabe Goliaths. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Footnote: Undisturbed Water by Seryddwr 1 year 44 weeks* ago* The reflection of others on: The reflection of others on the waters of our existence is quite a journal of depth and interest. This is quite an entrancing concept more so when these others fill in their presence with intentionality or relational consummation rather than toxic consumption. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: CBD by redbrick 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Thanks for obliging the: Thanks for obliging the somewhat angstsy and darkish tone of this pragmatically pessimistic expression. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: pygmalean ivory by redbrick 1 year 44 weeks* ago* Your having highlighted those: Your having highlighted those lines demonstrates the core fear being expressed- that inextricable feeling of helplessness in the path of a fast forming snowballing avalanche that swallows everything in its trajectory. Thank you for your kindness on this poem, its communication is returning full circle. [ go to comment ]