An astonishing metamorphosis of the heart: I can feel the swelling inner triumph, the resolve, in the first stanza that gives way to the undeniable truth, expressed with tremors of emotion and showers of beauty, in the second. Your cunning imagery makes it an extraordinary adventure.
Your perceptive reading always gets to the heart of what is being read! Thank you so much for sounding out matters of the heart and the metamorphosis that it undergoes. Steadfastness is not often found nor easily expressed. That was the main challenge and continues to be a feature of writing over decades of life experience and maturing. May the adventures continue on!
Although brief, this poem presents a choreography of multiple processes, and introduces them with the exquisite phrase "parallel shores of imagined worlds." The power of your verbal skill to evoke and deploy this kind of effect is proof, yet again, of the quality of your artistry. I was going to add that it approaches the effect of the finest instrumental music, but then I stopped myself because such a statement is inappropriate: what it should be, rather, is that the finest instrumental music can, sometimes, approach the effect of the superlative accomplishment that your Poetry is.
Thank you kindly, Starward. It is with great pleasure to receive your feedback, particularly the link between music and poetry that has been asserted here. There are some things that have to be physically shouted out while others just the mere putting to words is enough expression. If that makes any sense. Again, my gratitude.
An astonishing metamorphosis
An astonishing metamorphosis of the heart: I can feel the swelling inner triumph, the resolve, in the first stanza that gives way to the undeniable truth, expressed with tremors of emotion and showers of beauty, in the second. Your cunning imagery makes it an extraordinary adventure.
Stunning!
Your perceptive reading
Your perceptive reading always gets to the heart of what is being read! Thank you so much for sounding out matters of the heart and the metamorphosis that it undergoes. Steadfastness is not often found nor easily expressed. That was the main challenge and continues to be a feature of writing over decades of life experience and maturing. May the adventures continue on!
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver
Thank you for that
Thank you for that encouraging reply. It's always a pleasure to read and comment on your profoundly beautiful creations.
Although brief, this poem
Although brief, this poem presents a choreography of multiple processes, and introduces them with the exquisite phrase "parallel shores of imagined worlds." The power of your verbal skill to evoke and deploy this kind of effect is proof, yet again, of the quality of your artistry. I was going to add that it approaches the effect of the finest instrumental music, but then I stopped myself because such a statement is inappropriate: what it should be, rather, is that the finest instrumental music can, sometimes, approach the effect of the superlative accomplishment that your Poetry is.
Starward
Thank you kindly, Starward.
Thank you kindly, Starward. It is with great pleasure to receive your feedback, particularly the link between music and poetry that has been asserted here. There are some things that have to be physically shouted out while others just the mere putting to words is enough expression. If that makes any sense. Again, my gratitude.
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver