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patriciajj commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Leadings Toward Stars; Apostolic Letter From Evaristus, Bishop Of Rome** by S74rw4rd-13d 2 years 32 weeks* ago* This correspondence of: This correspondence of supreme importance was a bold idea because only the best presentation would do, and you triumphed! Stately elegance, inspiring faith and an epic musicality led me gracefully down each line, or rather, the steps, of your gleaming poetic monument. You threaded Biblical concepts into the unique and fluid elegy like a pro with everything flowing powerfully, seamlessly. I thought it was a wonderful, whimsical touch to take artistic licence and paint an endearingly angelic portrait of the young Saint John. A testimony of faith and a great showcase for your inborn talent. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Hierarchy by satishverma 2 years 32 weeks* ago* Excellent!!!: Excellent!!! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: My Personal Tragedy by satishverma 2 years 32 weeks* ago* In my opinion, the poem's: In my opinion, the poem's second stanza is key to the interpretation of all your poems in this style. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Ash In Eyes by satishverma 2 years 32 weeks* ago* I think the eerie atmostphere: I think the eerie atmostphere of this poem is underscored most successfully by the Moon's yawn in the final line. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: My Invisible Woes by satishverma 2 years 32 weeks* ago* I like this poem, as I like: I like this poem, as I like all of yours in this style, but that final stanza really, really rocks!!! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 2 years 32 weeks* ago* I hope you will finish more: I hope you will finish more hanging projects and post them here. I do not always keep up well with my reading committments. My health seems to be declining a little more rapidly this summer than I had expected, and I cannot always concentrate on my reading. [ go to comment ]
Tetra_nova commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 2 years 32 weeks* ago* Thank you, that's quite: Thank you, that's quite wonderful of you to say. My gratitude in that regard is ineffable. I have been inspired to finish some hanging projects and I don't write often, so your kind words are greatly encouraging~ [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Ripple by Tetra_nova 2 years 32 weeks* ago* I am an old man, and I have: I am an old man, and I have been reading Poetry for fifty years as of this past April. Your Poem is one of the best I have ever read at PostPoems. It resonates with profoud human wisdom and experience, and it is written in a conversational manner, like words overheard in a live setting in real time. That gives it a tremendous immediacy and power. [ go to comment ]
Dont_punch_grandpa commented on: Hide It by Dont_punch_grandpa 2 years 32 weeks* ago* Thank you, your words are too: Thank you, your words are too kind. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: My Baby Doll - Part VII by randyjohnson 2 years 32 weeks* ago* As a dog lover myself, and: As a dog lover myself, and the person who belongs to an elderly chihuahua who is beginning to ail, I understand your feelings, as I anticipate the inevitable and unavoidable day. However, as a Christian, I believe that Christ's sacrifice on the cross began the slow restoration of the whole Creation back to its pristine condition which it will achieve on what Saint Paul called "the Day of Christ Jesus" in the Philippian epistle. He also said the whole creation eagerly awaits the revealing of God's children; and that which is deceased cannot eagerly await I believe, on this basis, that all into which God has breathed life will be restored to eternal life---this is God's plan, from the beginning, anyhow. Those who have chosen to do unrepented evil will also choose to live apart from God, in the hell prepared for the devil and his demons. Since animals cannot choose sin, they need not choose hell, so, as I hold in Faith, all of the sinless creation will be restored, including Agnes and all the dogs I have loved through my life. That said, I do think the fourth line sounds a little self-serving. I doubt you meant it that way, but it does need some repair to say it a little better than it is now. Still, this is a great tribute to Agnes, and a reminder to appreciate the time we have with our pets while we have it. s [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: the foolish things i have written by osiriss- 2 years 32 weeks* ago* I applaud the profound wisdom: I applaud the profound wisdom in this very spiritual parable in verse. Your admission of the first line bespeaks a candor much like Saint Paul's, and it is of the weakest in the flock that the Shepherd chooses as appointed leaders, whether they hold official titles or not. [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Your socks by osiriss- 2 years 32 weeks* ago* Beautiful poem, splendidly: Beautiful poem, splendidly and fantastically beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: The You Within by LittleLennonGurl 2 years 32 weeks* ago* Hard-driving, soul-stirring: Hard-driving, soul-stirring lyrics that hit the bullseye on what it means to struggle for authenticity in an inauthentic world. I tell you honestly: your slamming, introspective and true-to-life lyrics outshine much of what I've heard in contemporary music. You have a gift, dear song spinner! [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Grab a hat by Pungus 2 years 32 weeks* ago* A stutter can be very: A stutter can be very beautiful and a stammer superbly divine! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Rhapsody of the Realms by patriciajj 2 years 33 weeks* ago* Words pale in the presence of: Words pale in the presence of such eloquent footprints. I think I'll be living off this very kind comment for a week. Or more. Huge love! [ go to comment ]