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patriciajj commented on: smoke and mirrors by redbrick 2 years 49 weeks ago
Brilliant! The structure: Brilliant!   The structure sharply illustrates the nerve-jangling, dead-end process suffered by anyone who has ever had the experience of interacting with an irrational, slippery control freak. You even listed, in ascending order of aggravation, some of the verbal abuser's favorite infuriating, mind-numbing tactics used to keep one ensnared in their juvenile labyrinth.     Then realizing they just aren't worth our time and effort, you mock the lunacy with hilarious word play and bring the poem to an outrageously delightful, visual conclusion.   Spot on and thoroughly enjoyable.  
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patriciajj commented on: Autumn Coffee Run by redbrick 2 years 49 weeks ago
You deliver one of life's: You deliver one of life's best kept secrets in a compact and cleverly simple package:   "Where else is boxed contentment? But where it's found in a moment."   Everyday Zen. Love it!   
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patriciajj commented on: To The Poet, The Eminent Constantine Cavafy [XLIX] by Starward-Led 2 years 49 weeks ago
As I read the pain-torn poem: As I read the pain-torn poem by Cavafy you referenced, I sensed shades of your own travail as expressed in many of your excellent poems. A worthy tribute to a legendary talent.  
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S74rw4rd commented on: THE EVOLUTION OF MY PRAYING by joy 2 years 49 weeks ago
This is an excellent: This is an excellent testimony and speaks volumes about your Faith.
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Teytonon commented on: Shakespeare quotes by Teytonon 2 years 49 weeks ago
Thanks for your comment..: Thanks for your comment. I'm sure it signifies something, but I can't figure out what it is. One thing for sure, you're certainly not an idiot. I'll have to read   it. Thanks for the suggestion!
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Pungus commented on: Shakespeare quotes by Teytonon 2 years 49 weeks ago
you should check it out: your first quote, though incomplete lacking it's finishing 'full of sound and fury' was what Faulkner used as a title to his book, which is really good.
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beaconzbard commented on: I SHALL REJOICE IN MY INFIRMITIES by beaconzbard 2 years 49 weeks ago
It's now on YouTube: You can watch/hear me read it at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/C2d2h2BiHeg
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beaconzbard commented on: The Doorway by beaconzbard 2 years 50 weeks ago
It's now on YouTube: YOu can now watch/ hear me read this one at:  https://youtube.com/shorts/DS_HzJIaajA
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Teytonon commented on: If only the years were knowledge. by S.X.K 2 years 50 weeks ago
Thank you for this..: Thank you for this wonderful poem. If I may add the following: If only the years were knowledge I'm sure some of us, as we grow older Would accrue enough knowledge to graduate college While others, who no matter how old they get Still play the fool and will be in grade school And of course, there are a few, sad to say Who will still be in pre-K!  
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georgeschaefer commented on: WAKE UP HARD by georgeschaefer 2 years 50 weeks ago
thanks but it's really about: thanks but it's really about waking up groggy and has nothing to do with sex
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patriciajj commented on: The Art of Human Suffering by FuriousIce 2 years 50 weeks ago
It takes uncommon skill to: It takes uncommon skill to turn anguish into outstanding art.   What a ride! Every twist and turn of intricate thought, every juxtaposition of words, every jolt of unsettling reality was penned with sheer brilliance.   How I wanted to swim against some of your stark, immersive waves of defeat and travail, but I have been in this place at times myself and made the same observations about society that I couldn't help making a strong connection to your words. The fury, the catharsis, at the end was palpable.   A spectacular and explosive study of despair. Amazing stuff.  
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Teytonon commented on: everytime by GeneConner2008 2 years 50 weeks ago
Yes, everytime..: Yes, everytime I want to comment how much I dislike your poem, I realize I love it! Thank you for posting it.
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Teytonon commented on: WAKE UP HARD by georgeschaefer 2 years 50 weeks ago
Yes, its not easy,,: Yes, it's not easy in the morning When you find as day is dawning  You start to get that certain feeling A part of your anatomy  A part I will not mention, see Is pointing toward the ceiling Oh, but you must go to work Alas, there is no time to jerk..      
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Teytonon commented on: The longest poem in the world by fat_sweaty_bob 2 years 50 weeks ago
The longest poem in the world..: The longest poem in the world might just possibly be, imo, the greatest poem in the world! A masterpiece! I loved it!
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Teytonon commented on: Without Salt & Pepper, Food Eats Itself by eyesofsociety 2 years 50 weeks ago
This is great!..: This is great! Really enjoyed reading it. So original and creative. Thanks for sharing it.
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