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Pungus commented on: never ever by redbrick 1 year 34 weeks ago
Hey: Blankshot
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Starward commented on: never ever by redbrick 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you, sir.: Thank you, sir.
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Pungus commented on: Assault Weapons Like Psychodelic Drugs by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
The first along with: Then why respond at all?
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Starward commented on: Assault Weapons Like Psychodelic Drugs by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
Not quite sure how to respond: Not quite sure how to respond to this.  I do not want to discard the Second Amendment, and I hope the essay does not imply that this is the solution to the problem.  
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Pungus commented on: Assault Weapons Like Psychodelic Drugs by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
What’s wrong with what I wrote?: Manuevering from the tumultuous topic of psychedelics- especially prevalent in the modern west as ever before- to the vexed ridicules of sexuality- and all the stigma that goes along with it- as a reasonable plea to 'discard the second amendment from our eternally esteemed constitution!' you seem to have summoned the Dickhead in your varied narration as a philisophical substitute for the many-menegaried mind to chime-
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Starward commented on: Tanka scribbled in crayon by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
This kind of subject is one: This kind of subject is one of those that the Tanka handles best.  I applaud your poem.
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Starward commented on: + 2ND POEMS: On Proverbs 3:5 by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
Thank you very much.  That is: Thank you very much.  That is quite a compliment, and I appreciate it.
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ramonathompsont commented on: THE SINGING TREE by joy 1 year 34 weeks ago
 A Joyful and sweet write.:  A Joyful and sweet write. brought tears to my eyes. thank you for shining some light into my day
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SSmoothie commented on: + 2ND POEMS: On Proverbs 3:5 by Seryddwr 1 year 34 weeks ago
Wow, what perfection in the: Wow, what perfection in the peace whilst in the midst of imperfect. Such courage of ownership, elegant, clear, simple and direct yet expertly crafted.  Beautiful surrender! 
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crypticbard commented on: Unpleasant bellchimes by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
An so we write. We just: An so we write. We just gotta!
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crypticbard commented on: Tanka scribbled in crayon by humanfruit 1 year 34 weeks ago
I had a friend some time ago: I had a friend some time ago who would skip their meds because it got in the way of their poetic angst and drive. Perhaps that intimation provides me with some hold of this poem.
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crypticbard commented on: crumpled up poems by ewbonitz 1 year 34 weeks ago
Back in the old grandparents': Back in the old grandparents' house before the thing was finally torn down were several packaging boxes (U-Haul variety) containing several tens of notebooks filled with scribblings much like your "crumpled poems" as with the demolished house, rather swiftly discarded, while I was away at university. They shall never be read again, for sure.
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crypticbard commented on: persistent blockage by ewbonitz 1 year 34 weeks ago
Isn't that such a worst: Isn't that such a worst frustration! I can so relate with this.
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SSmoothie commented on: never ever by redbrick 1 year 34 weeks ago
Just beautiful, the strength: Just beautiful, the strength in this poem is a beacon of light in the land of dreams all is well. 
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crypticbard commented on: There's always a but by SSmoothie 1 year 34 weeks ago
And what it boils down to is: And what it boils down to is this this wonderfully complex gathering of many things in the one person!
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