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Pungus commented on: Can you taste the commotion? by humanfruit 1 year 35 weeks* ago* Yeah, now I'm just tryna: Yeah, now I'm just tryna catch a break from the scene, before being shoved right back in those bloodsuckers! :) [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: DINNER by chris 1 year 35 weeks* ago* brings back fond memories.: brings back fond memories. good write [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: Tanka from a moldy scroll by humanfruit 1 year 36 weeks* ago* I want to applaud twice: : I want to applaud twice: first, for your respect for the traditional Tanka lineation and syllabification; and, then, for the gothis/science fiction effect that this poem presents. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: Tanka from a moldy scroll by humanfruit 1 year 36 weeks* ago* That moldy scroll got a: That moldy scroll got a vibrant attitude! Sweet read there. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: true nature of poetry by Spinoza 1 year 36 weeks* ago* Loved, love this - to be able: Loved, love this - to be able to walk away with dignity intact or even boltsered and recharged. And to be able to be doctoring, fathering, priesting as well as to doctor, father, and priest one to each other. [ go to comment ]
crypticbard commented on: keep your boots by Spinoza 1 year 36 weeks* ago* Strong contrasts against the: Strong contrasts against the 'thorns in the road,' best be on our toes (with our boots on!). [ go to comment ]
Pungus commented on: lamenting scent of love by Spinoza 1 year 36 weeks* ago* Boundless as desert dunes: A coyote scavenges for survival during a distanced romance; though what so becomes of his moon-quest? Do we discover through sifts, with burly paws of primordial passion, that eternally indivisible prism. Oh the starlight shimmers via phantom fingers who script precision for all us on such a hunt, boundless as desert dunes. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Alone Inside by Wordman 1 year 36 weeks* ago* It was a brilliant strategy: It was a brilliant strategy to describe loneliness as a detachment from one's very self, creating a sense of utter emptiness. I could feel the crushing desolation in that space "where I once was" where "steps wander me through dreams". An impressive expression that hits the target and pierces the heart. Stunning! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Patience by Wordman 1 year 36 weeks* ago* Some striking wordplay blazes: Some striking wordplay blazes throughout this metaphorical perspective on hope and patience. There's an enthralling and radiant unfolding as "shards of darkness" dissipate into "sunlight’s dance"; then the cycle begins again on a note of blissful renewal. And such an outstanding finale you created in that last line! Loving every moment of this. [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 1 year 36 weeks* ago* ;-): Rock on Crypticbard! You get me! [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 1 year 36 weeks* ago* ;-): My love for transcends all! RIP Lady A [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: Slipping Gears in Reality by Beavis 1 year 36 weeks* ago* ;-): Love you Dear! [ go to comment ]
Beavis commented on: I Knew this would be Hard by Beavis 1 year 36 weeks* ago* ;-): I thought you might like this! [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: still burning it down by Spinoza 1 year 36 weeks* ago* Sparkling and alluring: Sparkling and alluring metaphors breathe a whirlwind of energy into this little study of human attraction. "To the outsider," you write, "it appeared/ as/ a circus of The Fates", but there is something very real, lasting and "glowing hot" in the delicate inferno of the union. A dazzling dance. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: My Beautiful Despot by Spinoza 1 year 36 weeks* ago* I imagine there's quite a: I imagine there's quite a story behind this explosive, miniature portrait of a dangerous enchantress. Your layered metaphor of a teapot that produces heat and yet is "laden/ with lead" vividly illustrates two divergent experiences along the path. A timeless pitfall presented in a flash of skill and casual grace. [ go to comment ]