You wrapped up some instant karma in this startling tanka. I can't imagine what that must have been like, but leave it to a great poet like yourself to turn it into art. Intense stuff.
An onroad pile up is only ever spectacular to experience in a cinematic milieu. It is quite a different story as a real time participant! I've been in both and now experience it in poetry. Shall we call this a full circle on this topic?
You wrapped up some instant
You wrapped up some instant karma in this startling tanka. I can't imagine what that must have been like, but leave it to a great poet like yourself to turn it into art. Intense stuff.
By the fates ordained
Haha you don't have to, cuz it never happened; however, on karma, with the way words tend to manipulate reality, now I suspect might.
articulate.my.desire
vorp.structure.stagnate
doesnt.matter.haha
An onroad pile up is only
An onroad pile up is only ever spectacular to experience in a cinematic milieu. It is quite a different story as a real time participant! I've been in both and now experience it in poetry. Shall we call this a full circle on this topic?
here is poetry that doesn't always conform
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