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SSmoothie's picture

Just beautiful, the strength

Just beautiful, the strength in this poem is a beacon of light in the land of dreams all is well. 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

redbrick's picture

Thanks kindly SSmoothie. May

Thanks kindly SSmoothie. May the light keep burning and the dreams keep us smiling even in our sleep.


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galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

S74RW4RD's picture

I am so horribly behind on my

I am so horribly behind on my reading, having had a rough few days recently.  But I am glad to have caught up enough to read this magnificent poem, this beautiful testimony that simply sparkles and shimmers with great faith and wisdom.  Although I may not read all of your poems in a timely way, having to catch up when I can, I am certain that all of your poems will bear the kind of literary quality that so very well distinguishes you as a member of PostPoems.


Starward

redbrick's picture

Thank you Starward. I am most

Thank you Starward. I am most indebted to you for your generosity even under the roughness of these recent days.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

S74RW4RD's picture

Thank you, sir.

Thank you, sir.


Starward

Pungus's picture

Hey

Blankshot


bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

Pungus's picture

I am abloom with adoration

I am abloom with adoration for your style. Particularly, I remark, that dignified absence of punctuation at the end of each line, a puzzled me thoughts and notions entwined


bananas are the perfect food

for prostitutes

redbrick's picture

Punctuation as with all

Punctuation as with all things has its use and place. And in the tightrope of sorts that the use of language is, the balance between overuse and underuse is a point difficult to strike along the lines of articulation. Many thanks dear Pungus. Your encouraging words are most heartily received.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver

patriciajj's picture

You're one of the wise ones

You're one of the wise ones who know what truly matters, and you gracefully defied the menace of time by acknowledging it in this sparkling gem. An inspiration! 

redbrick's picture

When the poetic process

When the poetic process includes the meditation as well as the pouring out there is I feel an opportunity for wisdom to issue forth by a form of sublimation. Time surely can be menacing and also a tool in our journey. Thanks kindly for your goodly thought and much welcome visit.


here is poetry that doesn't always conform

galateus, arkayye, arqios,arquious, crypticbard, excalibard, wordweaver