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osiriss- commented on: Tarot card by osiriss- 1 year 40 weeks ago
I love your comment in so: I love your comment in so many ways
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S74rw4rd commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 1 year 40 weeks ago
The power of this poem: The power of this poem functions on two levels:  the beauty of its language, and the content that it presents to the reader.  This is excellent work.
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S74rw4rd commented on: Unquiet Dawn by patriciajj 1 year 40 weeks ago
I woke in the middle of the: I woke in the middle of the night to find that this poem has posted; and as I have said for a couple of years now, a poem posted by Patricia is an event.  This poem embodies that excitement.  The supple slenderness of her brief lines reveals a profound depth of meaning that fully blossoms toward the conclusion of the poem. Her poems are, primarily, poems of process.  They are choreographies of those processes which, in her Poetry, normally take place on a cosmic scale or stage.  If she writes about a flower blooming in some meadow, you can assume that there is also, in some part of the galaxy, a star emerging from a nebula and igniting unto light and warmth.  Her metaphors and similes are very dramatic, and the crows like priests that do not know what vows are, is downright comical.  But whatever effect is rendered by her poetic devices, they are all carefully and skillfully directed to the same end:  to describe the connectedness of all aspects of existing in a community of all things that exist.  The blooming flower in a meadow on earth shares a fellowship with the newly emerged and glowing star.  Whiile this is Poetry, and no one can dispute that fact, it is also a fully functional Cosmology (but without all the tedious mathematical equations; one need not have studied Calculus to understand her Poetry). Like Wallace Stevens' Poetry, Patricia's has a deliberate center of gravity which is usually deep within the poem, and in this particular poem it is in the final eight lines.  Here she shows us the connectedness or community of all existence:  everything has to do with everything everywhere.  This is a cosmologically credal statement---as self-evident as any of Euclid's axioms, but even more essential.  The connectedness of all things is axiomatic because all things were created by God, the name of Whom was revealed to Apostle John (chosen appropriately from among them all) as Love.  And Love has given the task of explication to certain Poets . . . not every Poet, but only a chosen few, among whom is Patriciajj.
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patriciajj commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 1 year 40 weeks ago
That's so sumptuously: That's so sumptuously beautiful and spontaneous! You certainly have an innate gift. Thank you kindly for honoring me with it. Keep penning, splendid Poet. 
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Savvart commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 1 year 41 weeks ago
Thank you so much for your: Thank you so much for your kind words, and for visiting my YouTube channel, they are so appreciated. Not getting many views on YouTube sadly. Here is my poem to you, that has sprung from your beautiful compliment.   In whispered tones so softly sent, A compliment as heavens’ scent, Where words, like dew on morning's bloom, Illuminate the subtlest gloom.   O blesséd speech that thus imparts A summer's warmth to winter hearts! Thy gracious air, with charm replete, Makes every echoed pulse so sweet... 
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patriciajj commented on: The Dreamcatcher by Savvart 1 year 41 weeks ago
It was pure pleasure to read: It was pure pleasure to read this vibrantly woven, glittering and lighthearted ode to dreamcatchers. My daughter suffered from nightmares when she was young, and the only cure seemed to be mom sleeping in her room, but just for fun I bought her a beautiful dreamcatcher for her wall.   Always loved them and I loved your crisp, mystical, lilting description of them in this marvelous poem.   I will definitely check out your YouTube channel!  
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S74rw4rd commented on: They Tell Me Jim Morrison's Grave Is Near Chopin's In Pere Lachaise by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 41 weeks ago
Yes, when I was younger, I: Yes, when I was younger, I had hopes of visiting there, as well as other sites in Paris, but the circumstances of my life have made that only wishful thinking.
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georgeschaefer commented on: They Tell Me Jim Morrison's Grave Is Near Chopin's In Pere Lachaise by S74rw4rd-13d 1 year 41 weeks ago
Oscar Wilde, Moliere,: Oscar Wilde, Moliere, Appolonaire, Edith Piaf, Balzac, Gertrude Stein, Collette, Paul Eluard, Delacroix, Camille Pissarro, Victor Hugo, Marcel Duchamp and many others are also buried at Pere Lachaise.  It is an interesting and solemn way to pass a couple hours if you ever find yourself idling in Paris and need something to do.
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georgeschaefer commented on: THE ACADEMIA by georgeschaefer 1 year 41 weeks ago
indeed: indeed
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georgeschaefer commented on: (INSANE PEOPLE ARE) INEXPLICABLY DRAWN TO ME by georgeschaefer 1 year 41 weeks ago
thank you for reading and: thank you for reading and commenting.  The crazies do make life more interesting
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unspokenvoice commented on: SIMPLY DIVINE by pamschwetz 1 year 41 weeks ago
love this : love this 
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ramonathompsont commented on: Rhetorically: A Conversation Trip Inside My Headspace by eleutheria0501 1 year 41 weeks ago
powerful!: powerful!
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ramonathompsont commented on: (INSANE PEOPLE ARE) INEXPLICABLY DRAWN TO ME by georgeschaefer 1 year 41 weeks ago
same here as the title says.: same here as the title says. for some reason insane people love me! ugh!
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ramonathompsont commented on: Fast by weepingwoman 1 year 41 weeks ago
most welcome: most welcome
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weepingwoman commented on: Fast by weepingwoman 1 year 41 weeks ago
Interesting for me too Ramona... : Thank You for visiting with me today_()_
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