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georgeschaefer commented on: REJECTED by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks* ago* I have many soulmates. I've: I have many soulmates. I've even crossed paths with a few of them over the years. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: SPRING GARDEN BRIDGE by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks* ago* That sounds very interesting: That sounds very interesting and I could visualise it perfectly. Great poem. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Wedding Guest (Part III) by allets 2 years 27 weeks* ago* I have my students read Rime: I have my students read Rime of the Ancient Mariner as a gateway to longform poetry and prose, once they are ready. Hold no breathe for Biden, keep at it. This is a wonderful work : ) [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Wedding Guest (Part II) by allets 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Among the greatest lines I have ever read: Wild sides walked there, the life risk everyone goes on about blazed where no woman had gone before midnight. Also particularly fantastic is "The junkman came by to collect / my purchased defibrulatered heart." A truly Detroit/industrial feel, the monguls raping the scene. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: Wedding Guest (Part I) by allets 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Your brilliance on tap, as well: Pigeons soared above the rigging's of Kroger's. I think this may be my favorite snippet from Part 1, with you having found a way to give a chain grocery store the feel of being a carved cathedral (speaking of a for-profit chain that is seen as something so much more). Finally getting a lengthy opportunity to dedicate to this work, thankfully : ) [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: War by schrammie 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Already traveling into the depths of the starlight: ..in this life, with this poem. A heavy contemplation that transitions from a burden, a cross, to a luggage bag for a vacation. Quite fascinating a philosophical turn. I imagine you're right, that we all sit in our own seat on that great flight across the plane to "the other side" (and beyond), but may we have good, loving company sitting besides us. p.s I love the reference to Into The Wild. One of my favorite stories, how ever tragic. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: The Light Falls Dim. by sweetwater 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Apologies for such a terribly: Apologies for such a terribly late reply, I've only just spotted your comment. Thank you very much I appreciate it. Sue. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Wind Blown Words. by sweetwater 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Thank you Stella, I do find: Thank you Stella, I do find it difficult when I don't write, but worse when I want to write but can't! I Hope you are keeping well. Sue. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Two Robin’s Sing. by sweetwater 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Thank you. I wasn't happy: Thank you. I wasn't happy with it so I upgraded it a bit. :-) sue. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Wind Blown Words. by sweetwater 2 years 27 weeks* ago* To Write: is a blessing, a sharing - u do it well. ~A~. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Two Robin’s Sing. by sweetwater 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Wow!: just wow! ~A~ [ go to comment ]
georgeschaefer commented on: POETRY FROM THE TRENCHES by georgeschaefer 2 years 27 weeks* ago* If I ever attain excellence,: If I ever attain excellence, I will try to hide it well. [ go to comment ]
tumbleweed commented on: By the pool by humanfruit 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Thanks : My seeds are felled upon corrupt concrete. But that's okay, there's more coming. [ go to comment ]
lyrycsyntyme commented on: By the pool by humanfruit 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Are your seeds okay?! haha.: Are your seeds okay?! haha. Clever poem. [ go to comment ]
allets commented on: Sing It And Write It by allets 2 years 27 weeks* ago* Thanks: anti-war posture, anti-death statistics. Topical. [ go to comment ]