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LittleLennonGurl commented on: Why Do We Let This Be by LittleLennonGurl 1 year 38 weeks ago
=): Thank you!!
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crypticbard commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Thanks PJJ, this montage: Thanks PJJ, this montage brings about a brocade of various angles and attempts that people make while engaging the new year.
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ramonathompsont commented on: Venom by kiwi_jiwi 1 year 38 weeks ago
powerful and so very moving.: powerful and so very moving. I too know how it feels to deal with what seems like an endless rage after suffering many years of torture from someone I trusted and thought cared for me. drinking from the well of poison and anger only makes it worse. somehow we must learn to overcome and move past the horror of our rage before it consumes us whole.
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patriciajj commented on: Why Do We Let This Be by LittleLennonGurl 1 year 38 weeks ago
I imagined these striking: I imagined these striking lyrics pounding and thrashing in compatible waves of sound, and they came to life: powerful, unrelenting and unapologetic life! You have an instinctive gift for lyrics that deserve to be heard and not just read, but I feel fortunate to receive them in any form I can.    The question you ask is one that rattles in my own mind at every turn, and the way you spilled it in this deluge of frustration and social consciousness is knock-out brilliant. Bravo!  
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patriciajj commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Your clever montage ends with: Your clever montage ends with meaningful contemplation and a brilliant definition of our yearly attempt at resolution. Stunning work.   
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patriciajj commented on: Tongue and Groove January 8, 2023 Mustard and Green by djtj 1 year 38 weeks ago
Your poems are always: Your poems are always bursting with deeper meaning, savvy visuals and ingenious symbolism that are incredibly satisfying to savor. You also know how to send shock waves through the most delicate and evocative poems: I'm still devastated by "The atrocities of your memory" in "What Do You See?".   Amazing work. You're the real deal.
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patriciajj commented on: Someday by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 38 weeks ago
With some ingenious word play: With some ingenious word play and shimmers of ageless love you created something truly exquisite. Loving this jewel! 
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patriciajj commented on: Better To Break Them Down (End This Hunger) by lyrycsyntyme 1 year 38 weeks ago
"And, after a while Find: "And, after a while Find out That's all it took, All along, To end this hunger"   Yes! So elegantly expressed, undeniable and enlightened. If only your brilliant guidance would sweep across the planet. Well done.   
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Starward commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Thank you, sir, and you, too.: Thank you, sir, and you, too.
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crypticbard commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Thanks Starward, Happy New: Thanks Starward, Happy New Year!
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crypticbard commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Thanks John, that means so: Thanks John, that means so much to 'hear.'
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Starward commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
I agree---beautiful and: I agree---beautiful and succinct.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: of resolute anticipation by arqios 1 year 38 weeks ago
Very beautiful.: Very beautiful.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: Why Do We Let This Be by LittleLennonGurl 1 year 38 weeks ago
Great question: A song worth singing, for sure.
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lyrycsyntyme commented on: a robot wrote this, it wasn't really me by Morningglory 1 year 38 weeks ago
If the comet doesn't come soon,: it's gonna be too late for us to start over again and avoid losing the last remaining pieces of what it means to be human.   Of course, I don't think the comet is coming. The "last days" aren't what the writers of religious lore thought they would be.
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