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Starward commented on: Amusing Childhood Memory by J-C4113d 1 year 23 weeks* ago* Thank you. During my: Thank you. During my childhood and adolescence, I had very few opportunities to "turn the tables" on my parents, or to be able to hold "dish back to them" what they constantly "dished out" to me. This was one of those few occasions. Thanks for reading and commenting! [ go to comment ]
sonnysblueridge commented on: come and get it by arqios 1 year 23 weeks* ago* A perfect picture in the mind: A perfect picture in the mind reading this haiku. a wonderful introduction to the artform. [ go to comment ]
sonnysblueridge commented on: "Headlines".... Unfinished and looking for feedback by sonnysblueridge 1 year 23 weeks* ago* This generous and touching: This generous and touching comment found me at the right time, thank you so so much. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Some Things Beyond Dimension by patriciajj 1 year 23 weeks* ago* Thank you, gifted lyricist,: Thank you, gifted lyricist, for stopping by and leaving such uplifting feedback. Looking forward to reading more of your work as well. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Something. by sweetwater 1 year 23 weeks* ago* Fantastic! You compressed so: Fantastic! You compressed so much atmosphere and some real chills into this cleverly subtle work of art. The ordinary transformed into the extraordinary: the unearthly. Truly brilliant. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: "Headlines".... Unfinished and looking for feedback by sonnysblueridge 1 year 23 weeks* ago* I'm thrilled to have: I'm thrilled to have discovered your vibrant, hard-driving and evocative work. I'm not sure what part of the Blue Ridge Mountains your screen name refers to, but I spend a lot of time up there on the Virginia side. This is amazing! I know I'm reading some dynamic lyrics when I can hear the tempo and absorb the ambiance, the essence, of the song without sound. Here you infuse a stirring and compelling defiance into a rhythm that rocks and hums like a pick up truck down a back road. Your skill for weaving impeccably chosen, striking words into what I imagine to be a catchy rhythm and melody is very impressive, and the theme is relevant without being dated in any way. Oh, and I'm loving that bridge! Feeling it. It stitches it all together and adds a flash of upbeat beauty to the poignant expression. I'm particularly enchanted with the folksy, ingenious eloquence, unfortunately rare in contemporary music, that really pops in some lines: "Underneath the skin Nothing but a pin Holding all the pieces down" Brilliant. Looking forward to the finished creation. So far, a stunning introduction to your talent. [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Amusing Childhood Memory by J-C4113d 1 year 23 weeks* ago* From a heartbreaking and: From a heartbreaking and traumatic childhood, you sifted through what most people would moan about and struck gold. A humorous, touching and teachable moment, skillfully penned. Applauding your ability to see the light in the darkness, the gift in the pain. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Footnote: On A Dismal Day by J-C4113d 1 year 23 weeks* ago* This really pulled at my: This really pulled at my heart, I also lost my Cocker Spaniel, and still grieve for him. So few words that cover so much heartbreak. sue. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: CORNY ELEVATOR PUNS by chris 1 year 24 weeks* ago* ‘Elevator’ is a misleading word to use.: 'Elevator' is a misleading word to use. Of course it 'elevates' if you're going up, but you're not elevated if you're going down. (Let me clarify, I'm not referring to anything sexual here). Anyway, I feel we should have a new term for it. I've given it some thought and come up with 'up and down box'. What do you think? [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Stepping Stones by Wordman 1 year 24 weeks* ago* Where do you find such: Where do you find such beautiful words, I wish I had your ability to write like that. This poem is stunning. Sue. [ go to comment ]
sweetwater commented on: Begin Again by Wordman 1 year 24 weeks* ago* Gosh! I love the warmth and: Gosh! I love the warmth and softness of your words throughout this lovely poem. Sue. [ go to comment ]
ramonathompsont commented on: Running away by Seeker 1 year 24 weeks* ago* I liked this alot. takes: I liked this alot. takes courage to seek new things and new paths in life. yet the familar also holds its own allure. which to choose? sometimes not so easy to know [ go to comment ]
sonnysblueridge commented on: Some Things Beyond Dimension by patriciajj 1 year 24 weeks* ago* The Blossoming of Spring: And the renewal it brings. You captured this well! I am excited to hear more. [ go to comment ]
sonnysblueridge commented on: Futon by Seeker 1 year 24 weeks* ago* Wonderful imagery: I like the flow of the story and how it transitions from the materials of the futon to the threads of the lost love. [ go to comment ]
Teytonon commented on: Greed Was Your Downfall by randyjohnson 1 year 24 weeks* ago* This poem can serve as a lesson to us all.: This poem can serve as a lesson to us all. Losing $70,000 gambling seems unimaginable to me. Would you know what he was playing? Was it blackjack or craps? If it was the roulette wheel, I understand what happened. When will people learn? They should NEVER bet on red! Take it from Wesley Snipes...ALWAYS BET ON BLACK!! [ go to comment ]