Of these I have of many been: Of these I have of many been remiss -
1 - failed. Hardly any of my 'juvenalia' has been preserved
2 - ever streamlining the process, the mountain of revisions, drafts and prior amendments have also been done away with
3 - mixed bag of tricks that still needs to be improved
4 - began doing this after the fact but a large portion of the archive was destroyed by natural disaster
5 - easier said than done, but doable
6 - no skin off my nose
7 - there is so much work to do on my own thinking to be bothered by others
8 - ah yes
9 - the curriculum is ongoing and expanding
10 - this is very much like driving under the influence and for one I am glad it isn't a physical thoroughfare for fear of mishaps on the highway.
Indeed, this is quite a: Indeed, this is quite a delicate form and like weaving or sewing with very fine material, quite a daunting task in the least. Your feedback brings me back to the atelier moment where things are in creative flux, a truly humbling portion of the journey of artistic production. Thank you so much.
I could see this fabulous: I could see this fabulous ending play out in my mind and I wanted to applaud. Your exceptional ability to craft, with impressive brevity, characters with gravity and believability and scenes that showcase our humanity as well as theirs, brought it all into focus.
Engaging, endearing, brilliant. Truly, this is worth cheering for. Bravo!
This is one incalculable: This is one incalculable gift, a condensed handbook, actually, that contains a complete spectrum of success strategies for young writers who hopefully won't have to repeat some of the mistakes I personally made. These valuable tips (that can make the difference between despair and perseverance) aren't limited to nuts and bolts information because, as we now know, it takes more than textbook knowledge to overcome all the roadblocks, trainwrecks and discouragement that buffet any creative individual.
With empathy and reassurance, you gave future poets extremely valuable emotional tools to overcome the self-doubt and inhibitions that are like creative steel traps: they can stop inspiration before it has a chance to even formulate an idea.
If I could whisper in the ear of my younger self I would say all of these things, especially #5-#7, and I would certainly have more poems under my belt. #2 would have prevented the disaster of losing every poem I wrote before 1990 as well as your own personal loss before the days of computers. (Awesome titles, by the way.)
This golden key to literary achievement, especially if shared with young, impressionable minds, could be expounded upon and made into a book. I'm seeing it. But I certainly understand why you want to concentrate on building your poetic palace right here, now.
I'm so glad you gave a shout out to djtj, an example of poetic ingenuity everyone here should read.
My humble gratitude for your enduring support, even in this premium collection of life-altering tips. May it be a treasured guiding light to many.
I have been reading Poetry: I have been reading Poetry for fifty years as of last month. I cannot remember ever seeing a poem formatted this way. And I applaud the testimony you have given here.
Gladly, and thanks to you for: Gladly, and thanks to you for posting your adolescent poems, and for setting an example that I really wished I had seen before 1978.
Lovers: And lovers don't decide what you've "outgrown". I'm heading now to read you poem. Thanks for the acknowledgement and poem. Advice To Adolescent Poets, When Your Own Resources Do Not Seem Sufficient.
It is indeed a privilege to: It is indeed a privilege to share in the enjoyment of this poem. I am so glad to hear that you "had a lot of fun writing this poem!" It is also my belief that it is among your best ones. I have often desired to enquire of the learned astronomers myself!
In my teen years, I wrote: In my teen years, I wrote several poems, also. I wish they had been as good as yours are here, and I wish I had been as smart as you obviously were then---to save my early poems as you saved yours. There ought to be a book of advice written for young poets: save everything . . . discard nothing . . . clip multiple drafts of any poem together . . . invest in folders---many, many folders.
Usually, I do not care for: Usually, I do not care for acrostic Poetry, but this poem is a wonderful exception to my usual preference. It is a great tribute to the great playwright, and it obviously required some deliberate planning rather than just being tossed together. I applaud your accomplishment here.
Patricia is not only a great: Patricia is not only a great Poet, she also has a good eye for poetic talent. The words of her comment are so well deployed that I have nothing to say to add to it. So I will also state, quite enthusiastically, that I agree with her assessment of this wonderful poem.
Thank you, brilliant: Thank you, brilliant wordcrafter, for your gorgeous and uplifting feedback. Your opinion is highly valued and your support means so much.