summer breeze

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2023

 

summer breeze

 

~ imPRESSions ~

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

in sijo style

Summer Breeze

 

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patriciajj's picture

You certainly triumphed with

You certainly triumphed with this regal and delicate form. Focusing on the fleeting enchantment, the ephemeral bliss, of a soft breeze and using precise and sensory words, you ignited the senses and created not just a poem, but an experience. Magical work.

redbrick's picture

Indeed, this is quite a

Indeed, this is quite a delicate form and like weaving or sewing with very fine material, quite a daunting task in the least. Your feedback brings me back to the atelier moment where things are in creative flux, a truly humbling portion of the journey of artistic production. Thank you so much.


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