Three Short Poems

Folder: 
1971 Teen Notebook

Shadows playing

Games of solitude

As red lights

And saddness

Surrounds the paper of words.

~Nov 2, 1971

 

I don't plan to stay too long

I might not stay at all

It's just that now I need the time

And some one place to be.

~Nov 11, 1971

 

  Now they're

Lined up against 

  A wall

One by one

  They come

Two by two

  They leave

Sigh....

~Nov 2, 1971

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Some one place to be From my Teenage notebook 1971 

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In my teen years, I wrote

In my teen years, I wrote several poems, also.  I wish they had been as good as yours are here, and I wish I had been as smart as you obviously were then---to save my early poems as you saved yours.  There ought to be a book of advice written for young poets:  save everything . . . discard nothing . . . clip multiple drafts of any poem together . . . invest in folders---many, many folders.  


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Lovers

And lovers don't decide what you've "outgrown". I'm heading now to read you poem. Thanks for the acknowledgement and poem.  
 Advice To Adolescent Poets, When Your Own Resources Do Not Seem Sufficient. 

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Gladly, and thanks to you for

Gladly, and thanks to you for posting your adolescent poems, and for setting an example that I really wished I had seen before 1978.


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I Hope U Stay At PostPoems

FOR~EVER! - ~(:D)- Lady A


 

 

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Thank you

As long as its here I will You too~Debbie

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Until Death

or arthritis takes my fingers :D. ~A~