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Starward commented on: Nocturnes: Are We There Yet? by J-C4113d 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Thank you very much for your: Thank you very much for your perceptive and complimentary comment. Some years ago---perhaps more than a decade---a former member of PostPoems challenged me to write a poem in which would, in a short space, present an entire ghost story, with an implied backstory and a semse of dread and foreboding. I think . . . I hope . . . that this one might qualify to fulfill that challenge. Thanks again for your kind comment. I apologize for my dely in acknowledging it, I am very unwell right now. [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Poem to end all poems by Unseen.warfare 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Wow, just wow... and here i: Wow, just wow... and here i am in this lace saying I know every line like the writing on the walls of my brain. Hat off you! I like it! I like it alot! More than alot! Awesome write! [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Wings Casting Shadows by cevance 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Still miss u 8 years later...: Wish you were here xx [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Here I go again by bishu 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Come back Bishy I need your: Come back Bishy I need your Sunshine Your smiling writes And passionate utterings Come back bishu We all need you! [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: The Weight Of Uncertain Saturdays by PeterChristophe... 1 year 17 weeks* ago* This is so sharp and: This is so sharp and calculated yet so natural! Its been 6 years where are you now? Are you coming back? Miss u. Hugss [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: Water to ink by justanotherscreename 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Just gorgeous! Where are you: Just gorgeous! Where are you these days? [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: It Sucks by Free-Spirited_Wolf 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Great rant you can feel the: Great rant you can feel the powerful emotions at play and the despair. Pain often brings profound insights. I am so sad that you are feeling anything like this. Happiness is fleeting but better fleeting than not at all. If happiness lasted it woukd become mundane and none would want it. Its tough but I'm sure you are tougher. So glad to hear from you. Tight Hugss and prayerss always xx [ go to comment ]
SSmoothie commented on: You'll forget by SSmoothie 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Any time! :D: Any time! :D [ go to comment ]
patriciajj commented on: Nocturnes: Are We There Yet? by J-C4113d 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Cue the surreal and menacing: Cue the surreal and menacing music . . . Truly awesome, the clutching power you unleashed in this brilliantly terrifying lament written from the POV of the denizens of "There". The poem moves with a cleverly plodding, dirge-like cadence through increasing levels of "unrelenting, unchanging despair" until finally "There" becomes "Here". The progression of horror is consuming because the gravity of the speakers' collective voice and the viewpoint put the reader right into the center of the ring. It's an immersive wordscape, an audacious poetic feat, a success. Congratulations on this! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: In House Of Criminals by satishverma 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Excellent, and that last line: Excellent, and that last line is very dramatic!!! [ go to comment ]
Starward commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Thanks Be To God** by J-C4113d 1 year 17 weeks* ago* No idea what all or any of: No idea what all or any of that means. [ go to comment ]
burkej1h commented on: *Yet [/+/^] : 27.225 MHz, Some Final Measures; Thanks Be To God** by J-C4113d 1 year 17 weeks* ago* 33: 33, 33, 33 in me... i fascist believe when my thoughtward decieve if I fail reminesse and call to action retort i find Lorem and ipsum and dolar in sort i read rhyme of release and the palence of theif never rare in the air of the fast before feet fastingnof feet I should say something sweet but the lines of amphetamine call to the sheet [ go to comment ]
burkej1h commented on: My pen is leaking by Teytonon 1 year 17 weeks* ago* Graceful: Response neuter palis was pen retort. enter paradises we called allot and made a remark talbot ton was the vice and knew my mine would expect after dark when the late of the rise. call ties I am sorted, and new did I bother to hue? A bunker belief if the shape wasn't new. I had all the queens horses and all out of sort... call the matter policia and tell her the Schwartz. finkle and fine with the waist I'm a dime, I call you at work but the line is submarine shorts. You have all the remerol remeron viagra it was SHAVE [ go to comment ]
burkej1h commented on: Vicious Cycle by Tortured_Poet 1 year 17 weeks* ago* I kept silent: Yet still it was expectation that regarded my thought Time flooded in and gazing at stars was something to do. let us now therefore , no condemnation to those in Christ Jesus called according to his purpose. for there is no forward thinking in the response of a madman is there? we would keep to ourselves and had a long list of reasons.not y so we tried to tell ourself what it was that God really wanted from our lives. search the response and make a query not an inquiry. There is a significant difference. [ go to comment ]
Tortured_Poet commented on: The meadow by chillin 1 year 17 weeks* ago* I thought this was a creative: I thought this was a creative and fun piece! I enjoyed reading it and I love the style and scheme used. This is overall well written in my opinion. Thanks for sharing! [ go to comment ]