Interesting that you should: Interesting that you should mention these classics, both of which were a pleasure to read in my childhood, but are now on a list of books that are banned in some parts of the US and have been removed from the Internet Archive as a result.
But don't get me started on how fascists are coming for our books. I just wanted to say that I enjoyed your lighthearted word game. Hemingway is smiling.
I like the wry, satirical way: I like the wry, satirical way you approached the treasonous horror show. Next installment? I'm almost afraid to look.
An entertaining twist on an anxiety-inducing, farcical, volatile drama.
Thank you for your favorable: Thank you for your favorable comment, and for the validation of what I try to express. I highly regard your voice on my pages and your support. Again, thank you, glad you enjoyed this.
Your use of entrancing,: Your use of entrancing, mood-altering atmosphere injects so much power into this romantic escape. The clash of emotions in "the kiss of day to night" when "both joy and sadness paint the sky in their brief/ embrace" was particularly effective.
What also makes this work so well is the beguiling images and sense of place that speak for the ecstasy, the union, of the lovers and all else is left to the imagination. What is not said is glorious, open-ended . . . pure magic.
Encore!
Thank you for sharing that: Thank you for sharing that immortal quote by a monumental artist. You expressed the hypnotic power the night sky with captivating simplicity and beauty. After reading this, I feel inspired.
I'm deeply moved by your: I'm deeply moved by your brave, authentic and shattering walk through the dark night that falls upon many of us. I felt it profoundly in every line, but the title suggests there is path, only temporarily hidden, to freedom. A lucid and devastating outpouring.
A sublimely simple, eternal: A sublimely simple, eternal cure for inner thirst, for what our true self longs for. With elegance and grace, you set our feet upon higher ground. A sparkling gem.
Praying you will get through..: Praying you will get through this ordeal and return to educating and enlightening us with your poetry. Keep the faith, my friend.